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Message de bobbyflip posté le 30-04-2007 à 14:05:02 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour je dois faire pour la rentrée un dialogue entre deux personnes serait il possible que quelqu'un corrige les fautes qui je pense sont nombreuses ... merci d'avance
Winston heard his friend coming .
They decided to speak in a corner of the Winston’s room where telescreen , Bigbrother, can’t see them .
- Bobby , I uncover incontrovertible proof that the Party is lying, we have do to something to get out of Océania.
- You know that’s impossible , Big Brother is watching everywhere.
- That’s right , but i can’t live anymore in a world in which we can’t fall in love with a person of our choice , in which we rewrite the history for the party , in which whe can’t think by our self.
- I’m okay with you Winston , but outhere it’s war and we can’t escape !
- We have to find a solution .Have you see recently our friend John?
- No, last week we where together but I don’t see him anymore.His work in the ministry of truth could help us to escape of Oceania.
- I’m worried about him .I think the party can ride of him.
- So , what can we do ?
- Since I work in the Records Department of the Ministry of Truth in the section charged with modifying historical news archives for consistency I maybe could learn by heart the real history and then find something we can do .By the past il y a eu many revolutions in many countries ...
- That’s an idea !But we have to know it ‘ll take a lot of time !
- That’s not a problem .We have to change this society.
- By my work , I can do something important to : the novelanguage have been create to eliminate the “thoughtcrime “. If I learn the “Ancilanguage “ we could maybe learn a lot of words that the party don’t want us to learn because they don’t want us thinking by ourselves.
- You’re right.
- What’s about Julia ?
- I feared that she whas an informant of Anti Sex League . However, to my surprise, she reveals herself as a subversive .I’m afraid we embark on an illicit and dangerous relationship.
- Can you trust her?
- I think ...
- So , now we have to do anything like before .The party mustn’t know that we are friends .
- The next date , we’ll speak in the street ...
- Good luck Winston !
- Good luck Bobby!
Message de bobbyflip posté le 30-04-2007 à 14:05:02 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour je dois faire pour la rentrée un dialogue entre deux personnes serait il possible que quelqu'un corrige les fautes qui je pense sont nombreuses ... merci d'avance
Winston heard his friend coming .
They decided to speak in a corner of the Winston’s room where telescreen , Bigbrother, can’t see them .
- Bobby , I uncover incontrovertible proof that the Party is lying, we have do to something to get out of Océania.
- You know that’s impossible , Big Brother is watching everywhere.
- That’s right , but i can’t live anymore in a world in which we can’t fall in love with a person of our choice , in which we rewrite the history for the party , in which whe can’t think by our self.
- I’m okay with you Winston , but outhere it’s war and we can’t escape !
- We have to find a solution .Have you see recently our friend John?
- No, last week we where together but I don’t see him anymore.His work in the ministry of truth could help us to escape of Oceania.
- I’m worried about him .I think the party can ride of him.
- So , what can we do ?
- Since I work in the Records Department of the Ministry of Truth in the section charged with modifying historical news archives for consistency I maybe could learn by heart the real history and then find something we can do .By the past il y a eu many revolutions in many countries ...
- That’s an idea !But we have to know it ‘ll take a lot of time !
- That’s not a problem .We have to change this society.
- By my work , I can do something important to : the novelanguage have been create to eliminate the “thoughtcrime “. If I learn the “Ancilanguage “ we could maybe learn a lot of words that the party don’t want us to learn because they don’t want us thinking by ourselves.
- You’re right.
- What’s about Julia ?
- I feared that she whas an informant of Anti Sex League . However, to my surprise, she reveals herself as a subversive .I’m afraid we embark on an illicit and dangerous relationship.
- Can you trust her?
- I think ...
- So , now we have to do anything like before .The party mustn’t know that we are friends .
- The next date , we’ll speak in the street ...
- Good luck Winston !
- Good luck Bobby!
