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Message de arpagiont posté le 02-10-2007 à 19:33:07 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
J'ai fais un texte en anglais sur les merveilles du monde moderne .Si quelqu'un pouvait le regarder ?
For me the very best wonder from the modern world is the internet ,I think that internet is a wonderful source of knowledge .On internet we can find a lot of informations over what we search .We can speak with a lot of people around the world and share a lot of ideas .We can sell and buy every object . I don’t agree with Sam who say that you can be glued on you computer all the day and have no relations with others people because is normally to do other thinks like sports and on internet we can speak with others people .
Merci
Arpagiont
Message de arpagiont posté le 02-10-2007 à 19:33:07 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
J'ai fais un texte en anglais sur les merveilles du monde moderne .Si quelqu'un pouvait le regarder ?
For me the very best wonder from the modern world is the internet ,I think that internet is a wonderful source of knowledge .On internet we can find a lot of informations over what we search .We can speak with a lot of people around the world and share a lot of ideas .We can sell and buy every object . I don’t agree with Sam who say that you can be glued on you computer all the day and have no relations with others people because is normally to do other thinks like sports and on internet we can speak with others people .
Merci
Arpagiont
Réponse: Correction text 'wonders of the mode de arpagiont, postée le 02-10-2007 à 22:21:08 (S | E)
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Réponse: Correction text 'wonders of the mode de yople, postée le 03-10-2007 à 21:52:38 (S | E)
je suis encore debutant en anglais et j'ai compris ton texte c'est ce que tu voulais savoir ? si ton texte est comprehensible ?
Réponse: Correction text 'wonders of the mode de jean31, postée le 04-10-2007 à 11:37:08 (S | E)
For me the very best wonder in the modern world is the Internet. I think that the Internet is a wonderful source of knowledge. On the Internet we can find a lot of informations about what we search. We can speak with a lot of people around the world and share a lot of ideas. We can sell and buy every object. I don’t agree with Sam who say- that you can be glued on you- computer all day long and have no relations with others people. I believe it is normal
to do other things than sports and on the Internet we can speak with others people .