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Message de ruud03 posté le 27-02-2008 à 14:18:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Puis-je savoir si ce texte contient des fautes, s'il vous plaît. Merci.
I have search casting of to play in films and I saw in an agency of casting your announcement. I shall like to acquire the post of stunt man.
I applied my candidacy to your firm because a very good reputation had you and as you keep the persons if you are satisfied it is interest
I think be the candidate who you need because I participated in numerous filming as stunt man therefore I have experience.
If you keep my candidacy for what I hope, I am available at any time to come to pass of maintains and the same speed on one to contaminate of aptitude for the waterfalls of the film.
I thank you for the interest which you carried in my letter of candidacy. I shall very much like to work for your society
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merci d'avance a ceu qui me repondrons
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Modifié par bridg le 27-02-2008 14:28
Introduction et formules de politesse.
Message de ruud03 posté le 27-02-2008 à 14:18:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Puis-je savoir si ce texte contient des fautes, s'il vous plaît. Merci.
I have search casting of to play in films and I saw in an agency of casting your announcement. I shall like to acquire the post of stunt man.
I applied my candidacy to your firm because a very good reputation had you and as you keep the persons if you are satisfied it is interest
I think be the candidate who you need because I participated in numerous filming as stunt man therefore I have experience.
If you keep my candidacy for what I hope, I am available at any time to come to pass of maintains and the same speed on one to contaminate of aptitude for the waterfalls of the film.
I thank you for the interest which you carried in my letter of candidacy. I shall very much like to work for your society
139 words
merci d'avance a ceu qui me repondrons
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Modifié par bridg le 27-02-2008 14:28
Introduction et formules de politesse.
Réponse: dm d'anglais de joey93, postée le 27-02-2008 à 17:34:30 (S | E)
Salut Ruuud03, j'ai lu ton travail, voilà quelques corrections, mais je ne suis pas totalment sûre : I would like to acquire the post of stunt man. wOULD LIKE exprime la volonté.
I apply (pas de prétérit qui est utilisé lorsqu'il y a une disconnection avec le présent)my candidacy to your firm since it has a very good reputation / it is well-reputated; and also because you keep the persons if you're satisfied with them/ if you appreciate their works.
I think that I can be the candidate that you need...therefore I have some experiences.
Je dois avouer que je ne comprend vraiment ce que tu veux dire dans le reste de ta lettre, si tu pouvais expliquer. Joey 93
Réponse: dm d'anglais de hughy, postée le 27-02-2008 à 17:38:11 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Oui, les fautes que j'ai trouvées sont :
ceu au lieu de ceux et répondrons au lieu de répondront.
salut !
