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Message de swiiss-giirl posté le 26-10-2008 à 19:57:46 (S | E | F)
PLEASE Can y0u help me? Are there errors in this text? THANK YOU.
Hi! I really like Zachary too, but he isn't my favourite star. My favourite star is Jesse McCartney. I think that he's the best singer of the world! He's only 21 years old but he has made 3 albums (Beautiful Soul, 2004/ Right Where You Want Me, 2006/ Leavin', 2008). I love them! My favourite songs are "Beautiful Soul", "Leavin'" and "De Toi à Moi" (a special song made for his French fans). He's also an actor. He has played in different soap operas and movies. He played Bradin in Summerland, my favourite soap opera.
I'm an huge fan of him! He's my idol!
Jesse, I love you!
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Modifié par bridg le 26-10-2008 20:53
Message de swiiss-giirl posté le 26-10-2008 à 19:57:46 (S | E | F)
PLEASE Can y0u help me? Are there errors in this text? THANK YOU.
Hi! I really like Zachary too, but he isn't my favourite star. My favourite star is Jesse McCartney. I think that he's the best singer of the world! He's only 21 years old but he has made 3 albums (Beautiful Soul, 2004/ Right Where You Want Me, 2006/ Leavin', 2008). I love them! My favourite songs are "Beautiful Soul", "Leavin'" and "De Toi à Moi" (a special song made for his French fans). He's also an actor. He has played in different soap operas and movies. He played Bradin in Summerland, my favourite soap opera.
I'm an huge fan of him! He's my idol!
Jesse, I love you!
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Modifié par bridg le 26-10-2008 20:53
Réponse: My favourite .. (correction) de chrislondon, postée le 26-10-2008 à 20:43:14 (S | E)
Bonsoir.
C'est très bien mais j'ai vu deux choses:
the best singer of the world. 'of' n'est pas correct.
'an huge fan': on prononce 'h' en anglais. 'an' n'est pas correct.
À vous maintenant...
