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Ravi (correction)
Message de olgaga100 posté le 27-10-2008 à 11:14:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pouvez vous s'il vous plaît corriger mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance.
"Sir, I want to speak with you because we are a problem." said Ravi.
- OK, but call me Peter.
- Ok Peter. You are exasperating. you are an abominable small man. I am in end of nerves.
- Give a little respect to me young-man.
- I will like but you aren't even respectful of my reception because I hold to announce you that it's in my home that you live. Since you are here I feel not only at home but in your home.
You destroyed my house, you put fire at my kitchen and you use my porcelain service.
-I acknowledge being a little awkward.
-A little awkward??? a little? NO YOU ARE A MARTYRDOM!!!!!!
- I'm sorry, sorry Ravi. I wanted just to make my better.
- Ok, We can try to put each of his.
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Modifié par bridg le 27-10-2008 12:47
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Message de olgaga100 posté le 27-10-2008 à 11:14:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pouvez vous s'il vous plaît corriger mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance.
"Sir, I want to speak with you because we are a problem." said Ravi.
- OK, but call me Peter.
- Ok Peter. You are exasperating. you are an abominable small man. I am in end of nerves.
- Give a little respect to me young-man.
- I will like but you aren't even respectful of my reception because I hold to announce you that it's in my home that you live. Since you are here I feel not only at home but in your home.
You destroyed my house, you put fire at my kitchen and you use my porcelain service.
-I acknowledge being a little awkward.
-A little awkward??? a little? NO YOU ARE A MARTYRDOM!!!!!!
- I'm sorry, sorry Ravi. I wanted just to make my better.
- Ok, We can try to put each of his.
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Modifié par bridg le 27-10-2008 12:47
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Réponse: Ravi (correction) de azer3, postée le 27-10-2008 à 21:44:02 (S | E)
Bon il ya des répliques dans la quelle j'ai n' pas arriver a bien comprendre le sens de ce que tu vient de dire mais voici mon essai qui reste une approche.
- Sir we want to speak with you because we have a problem.Said Ravi
- Ok, but please call me Peter.Said Peter
- Ok Peter. You knew; you are exasperating, such an abominable small man,you make me in the end of nervous.Said Ravi
- Give-me some respect young-man!!!Said Peter
- I would like but aren't even respectful for/to my reception.I hold to announce to you that it's my home where you are living.Since you are here i havn't felt lonly im my home;but i have always felt that i'm in your home.
You destroyed my house,you fired my kitchen and you used my porcelain service.Said Ravi
- I acknowledge to be/being a little awkward.Said Peter
- A little awkward!!! A little! No you are a martyrdom!!!Said Ravi
- I'm sorry, sorry Ravi. I just want to make myself/ to be better.Said Peter
- Ok, we can tray to make each of this.Said Ravi
unitil de mettre les crochets " avant et après les répliques. Bonne courage
