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Message de wys13 posté le 29-10-2008 à 13:24:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois résumé mon texte, je l'ai fais j'aurai besoin d'une correction
SVp et merci
This document deals with the feature of dubai tower.
First, we can learn burdj Dubai is the tallest strucure in the world (the height is not final, it is not specified) which is equipped an antenna at the peak.
Then, we can see the preocupation of senior designers face to earthquake and the world trade center attack. At least, that why the developper by taking into account the characterisic of the plot and they decide to built the project from heavy-duty conrete then a steel. In a way, it is a modern project by the combination of these construction materials.
As for the interior we can qualify this skyscraper of large luxe hotel. In effect, we can underline multidimensional character of the building because the first eight floor will consist of a hotel, restaurants,gyms, and a nightclub. Then the other floors are modern and luxurious apartment.Without forgetting the swimming pool on the 76th flloor , the highest of its kind in the world.
Moreover to reinforce the feeling of good being, with low there is a large refuge room’s accessible.
The skeleton of this project are a large luminous staircases, and there are a lot of escape routes
to guarantee safety.
Therefore,Burdj doubai will acommodate up to 35.000 people in a mixture of hotels offices and apartments.
Je vous remercie.
Message de wys13 posté le 29-10-2008 à 13:24:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois résumé mon texte, je l'ai fais j'aurai besoin d'une correction
SVp et merci
This document deals with the feature of dubai tower.
First, we can learn burdj Dubai is the tallest strucure in the world (the height is not final, it is not specified) which is equipped an antenna at the peak.
Then, we can see the preocupation of senior designers face to earthquake and the world trade center attack. At least, that why the developper by taking into account the characterisic of the plot and they decide to built the project from heavy-duty conrete then a steel. In a way, it is a modern project by the combination of these construction materials.
As for the interior we can qualify this skyscraper of large luxe hotel. In effect, we can underline multidimensional character of the building because the first eight floor will consist of a hotel, restaurants,gyms, and a nightclub. Then the other floors are modern and luxurious apartment.Without forgetting the swimming pool on the 76th flloor , the highest of its kind in the world.
Moreover to reinforce the feeling of good being, with low there is a large refuge room’s accessible.
The skeleton of this project are a large luminous staircases, and there are a lot of escape routes
to guarantee safety.
Therefore,Burdj doubai will acommodate up to 35.000 people in a mixture of hotels offices and apartments.
Je vous remercie.
