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Message de lartistedad posté le 31-08-2015 à 15:47:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
est-ce queqlq quelqu'un un pourrait m'aider s'il vous plait en me corrigeant m'indiquant mes fautes?
Merci d'avance ;)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-08-2015 17:06
Message de lartistedad posté le 31-08-2015 à 15:47:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
est-ce que
Merci d'avance ;)
1.We’re gonna to speak with you over known brands as L’Oréal, Chanel and Dior.
2.Such as the CEO of Apple, he had to attend to every meetings of the Board.
3.Julia will explain you when and how was Twitter found.
4.Coca-Cola has released one of the better advertisement, that well represents the image of the society. Every times I see it, I can’t help to think that it makes well its advertising.
5.Now Jack will speak what was the 100-millions-pounds donation, just before to give the floor to Diana.
6.Most companies are looking for ways to improve benefits and become more beneficial.
7.Steve Jobs’s parents met each other in the 40’s near to their school and they become very fast friends.
8.Facebook is the social networking number one. 13 millions dollars was invested into a movie realized by David Fincher.
9.Steve Jobs hadn’t been graduated of university. I learned of it last year.
10.Advertisers pay very attention to their target audience and at several times they put the limits very high.
11.Coca-Cola is made by 5 ingredients. His taste depends of many differents things so that it appeals at a large audience.
12.Very young, Bill Gates took an interest for informatics. He told that he will have given everything in exchange of a new computer.
13.Could you have a look on my homeworks? I have to hand them in in the five of May 2015.
14.I can’t resist to Nutella. I made my stage at Ferrero and happily I was charged of to taste the products. It was the best experiment I have made.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-08-2015 17:06
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