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    Phrases /correction

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    Phrases /correction
    Message de aurelienworks posté le 19-03-2019 à 10:28:20 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour,
    J'aurais besoin que vous m'aidiez à confirmer si ces phrases sont correctement écrites s'il vous plait.
    Merci d'avance ;)

    1- The change of Prime Ministerwill have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.

    2- It's a variation of that card game

    3- We have reached our goal, we have a new accomodation

    4- He's efficient. His lasts footages are very good.

    5- I am reluctant, i lashed out at me yesterday

    6- Shortly, we will do something unusual

    7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pau a rent here.

    8- He's an impersonater. His performances are very successful.

    9- For one he does something unusual !

    10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !

    11- This shopkeeper is also bowler.

    12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.

    13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, i feel it !

    14- He is motivated but it shouldn't feel him above the law...
    -> I'm not sure at all how to translate it... "il ne faudrait pas qu'il se croie au dessus des lois)

    15- He easier to recruit someone punctual


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    Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2019 10:54
    C'est trop long 30 phrases! long à corriger et au fil des messages ce sera difficile de s'y reconnaitre.
    Ouvrez un 2e topic avec les 15 autres phrases que je vous renvoie, merci.



    Réponse : Phrases /correction de gerondif, postée le 19-03-2019 à 12:42:08 (S | E)
    Bonjour
    1- The change of Prime Minister will have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.

    2- It's a variation of that card game

    3- We have reached our goal, we have a new accomodation (accommodation ne me semble pas fonctionner avec a, comme luggage, furniture...)

    4- He's efficient. His lasts footages are very good.

    5- I am reluctant, i (he) lashed out at me yesterday

    6- Shortly, we will do something unusual

    7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pau pay a rent here.

    8- He's an impersonater. His performances are very successful.

    9- For one (once?) he does something unusual !

    10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !

    11- This shopkeeper is also a bowler.

    12- He is involved in a dozen crimes. (pour 12 pile, sinon in dozens of crimes, dans des dizaines de...)

    13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, i(majuscule) feel it !

    14- He is motivated but it shouldn't feel him (construction incorrecte) above the law...
    -> I'm not sure at all how to translate it... "il ne faudrait pas qu'il se croie au-dessus des lois)(it shouldn't make him feel above the law)

    15- He easier(il est plus facile de ? sûrement pas he et mettez un verbe) to recruit someone punctual





    Réponse : Phrases /correction de aurelienworks, postée le 19-03-2019 à 15:25:42 (S | E)
    Merci gérondif, quelques erreurs d'étourderie en effet, désolé, très mmotivé pour apprendre mais le temps manque parfois !

    1- The change of Prime Minister will have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.

    2- It's a variation of that card game

    3- We have reached our goal, we have new accomodation .C'est mieux d'utiliser accomodation ou housing ou flat/apartment/house?

    4- He's efficient. His last footages are very good.

    5- I am reluctant, he lashed out at me yesterday

    6- Shortly, we will do something unusual

    7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pay a rent here.

    8- He's an impersonator. His performances are very successful.

    9- For once he does something unusual !

    10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !

    11- This shopkeeper is also a bowler.

    12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.

    13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, I feel it !

    14- He is motivated but it shouldn't make him above the the law.

    15- It's easier to recruit someone punctual.



    Réponse : Phrases /correction de gerondif, postée le 19-03-2019 à 15:36:04 (S | E)
    Bonjour
    1- The change of Prime Minister will have big fallouts and the rise of nationalism could complicate the situation.

    2- It's a variation of that card game

    3- We have reached our goal, we have new accomodation (deux M) C'est mieux d'utiliser accomodation ou housing ou flat/apartment/house ?
    tout dépend de ce que vous voulez dire, il n'y a pas de "mieux" accommodation, c'est le logement en général, avoir un toit sur sa tête, housing fait plus penser à la politique de la mairie en matière de logement, a new flat, un nouvel appart, apartment en américain,flat en anglais, et house une maison)

    4- He's efficient. His last footages are very good.

    5- I am reluctant, he lashed out at me yesterday

    6- Shortly, we will do something unusual

    7- It's an upmarket district . I can't afford to pay a rent here.

    8- He's an impersonator. His performances are very successful.

    9- For once he does (is doing) something unusual !

    10-What a breach ! He has reached such a level of delinquency !

    11- This shopkeeper is also a bowler.

    12- He is involved in a dozen crimes.

    13- He is so easy-going and hard-working. He will be hired, I feel it !

    14- He is motivated but it shouldn't make him feel above the law.
    une variante he had better not deem himself above the law.
    15- It's easier to recruit someone punctual.




    Réponse : Phrases /correction de aurelienworks, postée le 19-03-2019 à 16:24:08 (S | E)
    Merci beaucoup gérondif pour votre aide




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