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    Essay/ past tense

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    Essay/ past tense
    Message from sandze123 posted on 30-07-2019 at 09:13:02 (D | E | F)
    Hello,
    Please can you guys check my essay?
    Thanks for any reply.

    I woke up at 8 o’clock yesterday. It was a little bit late than my usual routine. I straightly went to the bathroom and had bathed. When I reached at the kitchen my mom had already prepared breakfast for me. I ate breakfast with mom. After that i was ready for my job. Due to my car had broked last night I should catch the bus . The bus had just left the stop when I arrived. I had been waiting for next bus for half an hour. It was already late for my job. In the mean time my friend was going that way so i called and asked for help, but he refused because he was going to pick her mom from city. Finally, one last bus came and I went to the job. When I reached my boss had already left the office. I had been working there for 8 hours without break before I went home.

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    Edited by lucile83 on 30-07-2019 11:07


    Re: Essay/ past tense from traviskidd, posted on 30-07-2019 at 14:53:06 (D | E)
    Hello.

    -straightly immediately, straightaway()
    -went into the bathroom ("to go to the bathroom" means to use the toilet)
    -had bathed (wrong tense, also "bathe" is too formal, use "take/have a bath")
    -Due to + noun (gerund)
    -should = devrais, you want devais
    -had been waiting (wrong tense)
    -meantime (one word)
    -he was going to pick (particle) her (whose?) mom
    -reached arrived, got there
    -had been working (wrong tense)

    See you.



    Re: Essay/ past tense from lucile83, posted on 30-07-2019 at 16:28:34 (D | E)
    Hello,
    ... so i called... we write I, not i




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