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Corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît
Message de gougou posté le 04-01-2007 à 15:35:14 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous,
Pourriez vous corriger les fautes de ce textesvp s'il vous plaît :
" Hello madam, could you save my life? My flight is cancelled, my battery of mobile is unloaded and I must absolutely warn my boss. Could you lend me your portable ? " He asks on a terrified tone
" Yes, no problem "
The brown girl takes her mobile in her handbag while the man looks attentively what she does over her shoulder.
The young woman picks up her mobile.
" Now I am sure, that is well you. " he exclaims of an irritated tone
" That is this that there is sir? I do not understand. "
" That is well you who stole me my wallet by shoving me a few moments ago. "
" Wait, I explain you all "
" I don’t want any explanation, return it to me, or we will see the police both hand in hand!" At the same moment a blonde girl arrives and the man seems to know her.
" That do you do here my darling? " he asks.
" I explain you all, I am Brenda the best friend of your wife and I stole you your wallet to give him. " the brunette explains by preventing her friend from speaking.
" I asked him to steal it to you to go to buy the dog that you promised me. " the blonde girl answers blushing
" It is time, I have to travel by the plane but we will speak again about that on my back, it isn’t by doing this way that I will buy a dog to you"
The brunette tries to comfort the blonde while the man leaves by running to take the plane.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-01-2007 16:22
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Modifié par gougou le 04-01-2007 19:35
Message de gougou posté le 04-01-2007 à 15:35:14 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous,
Pourriez vous corriger les fautes de ce texte
" Hello madam, could you save my life? My flight is cancelled, my battery of mobile is unloaded and I must absolutely warn my boss. Could you lend me your portable ? " He asks on a terrified tone
" Yes, no problem "
The brown girl takes her mobile in her handbag while the man looks attentively what she does over her shoulder.
The young woman picks up her mobile.
" Now I am sure, that is well you. " he exclaims of an irritated tone
" That is this that there is sir? I do not understand. "
" That is well you who stole me my wallet by shoving me a few moments ago. "
" Wait, I explain you all "
" I don’t want any explanation, return it to me, or we will see the police both hand in hand!" At the same moment a blonde girl arrives and the man seems to know her.
" That do you do here my darling? " he asks.
" I explain you all, I am Brenda the best friend of your wife and I stole you your wallet to give him. " the brunette explains by preventing her friend from speaking.
" I asked him to steal it to you to go to buy the dog that you promised me. " the blonde girl answers blushing
" It is time, I have to travel by the plane but we will speak again about that on my back, it isn’t by doing this way that I will buy a dog to you"
The brunette tries to comfort the blonde while the man leaves by running to take the plane.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-01-2007 16:22
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Modifié par gougou le 04-01-2007 19:35
Réponse: Corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît de vivi22, postée le 04-01-2007 à 20:31:18 (S | E)
Hello voilà ce que je peux faire:
-The battery of my mobile phone
-pas portable mais MOBILE,MOBILE PHONE, ou CELL PHONE
-on dit to LOOK AT
-pas that it is well you mais je dirais that it is you simplement
-He exclaims with an irritated tone
-on ne dit pas that it is that ther is sir?(je ne comprends pas ce que vous voulez dire)
-to show==> showing on dira by showing it to me
-WHAT do you do here....
(That signify CE What CEQUE)
-on dit to give something to someone on dira alors TO GIVE IT TO HIM
-To steal FROM somebody
-je dirais plutôt to take the plane que to travel by the plane
-on my return plutôt que on my back
-it is not by doing it this way that I will buy you a dog
Voilà les fautes que je vois mais je n'en suis pas sûre et il en reste peut être mais c'est très bien
bon courage