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Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45
Message de here4u posté le 16-12-2025 à 22:15:26 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) People are becoming more and more individualistic...

2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not?

3) With the Internet, you'll never be lonely again...

Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix ? en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert? Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le dimanche 28 décembre 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 17-12-2025 à 14:13:27 (S | E)
Hello dears,

We have an answer to the tricky questions I asked you!

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic... Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...

It is true that despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other
Education, new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.

Thanks for your help!

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 19-12-2025 à 11:28:39 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic... Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...

It is true that punctuation despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other.
Education, xxnew technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 20-12-2025 à 14:06:20 (S | E)
Hello, green required!

My indications:

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
It is true that punctuation despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other.
Education, xxnew technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.
[ C'est une belle faute ! Grâce à toi, je suis en train de refaire un exercice sur le problème !

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de magie8, postée le 21-12-2025 à 09:14:14 (S | E)
Hello mon essai de correction

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, (each person with their smartphones and no one talking to the other
Education, (the new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than (associative life/voluntary sector/investment in [/vert]volunteer.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, ( (bad luck, people help each other.

qu'est-ce qui est faux avec misfortune?

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 21-12-2025 à 12:24:53 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
magie!

It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, (each person with their smartphones (without "s", each person has usually only one) no one talking to the others/the other three.
Education and ((the) new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The (or not "the"?) new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than (associative life/voluntary sector/investment in volunteer/life in society/social life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune (I would put both either singular or plural, in case of a major disaster or (a) misfortune/disasters or misfortunes), ( (bad luck, people help each other I'm not sure that's what was meant. Could it be The population helps itself (that's to say without relying on state aid)?

qu'est-ce qui est faux avec misfortune?
La "belle faute", ce serait the populations help themselves ?)

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de polaroid, postée le 21-12-2025 à 20:43:42 (S | E)
2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not?

I like detective stories because I like to search the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed the crime and at the moment he or she unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 22-12-2025 à 16:31:35 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Polaroid n'a pas respecté les modalités pour poster ce travail (à m'envoyer en mp!) , mais comme on n'était pas loin de la fin de ANSWER A, je laisse passer!

ANSWER B: Topic 2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not? please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.

I like detective stories because I like to search the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed the crime and at the moment he or she unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

Thanks for you help, correcting polaroid.

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 22-12-2025 à 22:38:13 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER B: Topic 2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not? please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.

I like detective stories because I like to search xx the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed (tense) the crime and at the moment xx he or she xx unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had (tense) a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It (what is "it"? permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing xx detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

In English, "assassin" has a restrictive definition. This is not the most appropriate word here.

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de magie8, postée le 24-12-2025 à 11:48:23 (S | E)
Hello
Mon essai de correction en suivant les indications de Gerold. Merci Gerold

I like detective stories because I like to search (out the killer and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the (killer's reaction when he or she (commits the crime and at the moment ( when he or she (is unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime (is complex. I find that the detective stories are very interesting. The (criminal often has a lot of imagination.
(These stories keep in suspense. (Readers don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer (reading a book because it works the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the (mind.
For people who really like this kind of stories, books (enable to imagine murders and corpses. But you must not be sensitive too much.
As far as I am concerned I find (these stories funny, and like everything about.
To conclude, if you would like to (spend a good moment, think to read detective stories. I wish you good reading/

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 24-12-2025 à 13:25:50 (S | E)
Hello!

magie!

I like detective stories because I like to search (out the killer (or murderer) and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the (killer's reaction when he or she (commits/is committing the crime and at the moment ( when he or she (is unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime/it (is complex. I find that ~~the~~ detective stories are very interesting. The (criminal often has a lot of imagination.
(These stories keep in suspense. (Readers don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer (reading a book because it works the/my brain and the/my imagination to create the scene in the/my (mind.
For people who really like this kind of stories, books (enable to imagine murders and corpses. But you must not be sensitive too much.
As far as, I am concerned, I find (these stories funny, and like everything about them.
To conclude, if you would like to (spend a good moment, think to read detective stories. I wish you a (not sure "a" is necessary here) good reading/

We can use "they" instead of "he and she".

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 28-12-2025 à 20:18:55 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here are the successive corrections of your EXPRESSIONS.

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic... Gerold 's indications:

It is true that punctuation despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other.
Education, xxnew technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.

My indications:

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
It is true that punctuation despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other.
Education, xxnew technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.
[ C'est une belle faute ! Grâce à toi, je suis en train de refaire un exercice sur le problème ! ]

L'essai de correction de Magie:

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, (each person with their smartphones and no one talking to the other
Education, (the new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than (associative life/voluntary sector/investment in volunteer.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, (bad luck, people help each other.

qu'est-ce qui est faux avec misfortune? Faux, rien... mais inexact...

Gerold's suggestions after magie's indications.ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...

It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. B It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, each person with their smartphone (without "s", each person has usually only one/ but everybody with their smartphones! ) no one talking to the others/the other three.
Education and ((the) new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The (or not "the"?as you like...) new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than (associative life/voluntary sector/investment in volunteer/life in society/social life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that, punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune (I would put both in the singular or plural, in case of a major disaster or (a) misfortune/disasters or misfortunes), ( (bad luck, people help each other I'm not sure that's what was meant. Could it be The population helps itself (that's to say without relying on state aid)?

qu'est-ce qui est faux avec misfortune?
La "belle faute", ce serait "the populations help themselves" ?) Yes, of course!
- 'disaster' est assez vaste et représente toutes sortes de désastres... (catastrophes naturelles - épidémies - accidents - etc.). (Put the plural.) Pourquoi rechercher un rythme binaire lorsqu'il n'est pas nécessaire ?
- 'people help themselves' signifie que les victimes se débrouillent pour sauver leurs sinistrés. Each other/ one another : expriment la réciprocité. Les autres populations aident les sinistrés.
Un bon texte au début, et TB ensuite !
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ANSWER B: Topic 2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not? initial text by polaroid

I like detective stories because I like to search the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed the crime and at the moment he or she unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 22-12-2025 à 22:38:13 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER B: Topic 2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not? Gerold's indications:

I like detective stories because I like to search xx the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed (tense) the crime and at the moment xx he or she xx unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had (tense) a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It (what is "it"? permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing xx detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

In English, "assassin" has a restrictive definition. This is not the most appropriate word here.

Magie's essai de correction en suivant les indications de Gerold. Merci Gerold

I like detective stories because I like to search (out the killer and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the (killer's reaction when he or she (commits the crime and at the moment ( when he or she (is unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime (is complex. I find that the detective stories are very interesting. The (criminal often has a lot of imagination.
(These stories keep in suspense. (Readers don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer (reading a book because it works the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the (mind.
For people who really like this kind of stories, books (enable to imagine murders and corpses. But you must not be sensitive too much.
As far as I am concerned I find (these stories funny, and like everything about.
To conclude, if you would like to (spend a good moment, think to read detective stories. I wish you good reading/
Good suggestions!

Gerold's suggestions after Magie's corrections.

I like detective stories because I like to search (out the killer (or murderer) and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the (killer's reaction when he or she (commits/is committing the crime and at the moment ( when he or she (is unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime/it (is complex. I find that the detective stories are very interesting. The (criminal often has a lot of imagination.
(These stories keep in suspense. (Readers don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer (reading a book because it works the/my brain and the/my imagination to create the scene in the/my (mind.
For people who really like this kind of stories, books (enable to imagine murders and corpses. But you must not be sensitive too much.
As far as, I am concerned, I find (these stories funny, and like everything about them.
To conclude, if you would like to (spend a good moment, think to read detective stories. I wish you a (not sure "a" is necessary here) good reading/

We can use "they" instead of "he and she".Yes, we should... 'He or she' is too heavy and clumsy.
Good correction!

My last indications after suggestions!

I like detective stories because I like to search out the murderer and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the (killer's reaction when he or she (commits/is committing the crime and at the moment when he or she (is unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime/it (is complex. I find that the detective stories are very interesting. The (criminal often has a lot of imagination.
(These stories keep in/ create suspense. (Readers don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer reading a book because it works my brain and my imagination to/ makes my brain and imagination create the scene in my mind.
For people who really like this kind of stories, books enable to imagine murders and corpses. But you must not be sensitive too much.
As far as, I am concerned, I find these stories funny, and like everything about them.
To conclude, if you would like to spend a good moment, think to read detective stories. I wish you a (not sure "a" is necessary here) good reading/yes, 'a good reading' is good.

- Je n'aime pas trop 'search out', 'search' le plus souvent signifie 'fouiller', 'retourner': To hunt for/ to track for/
- OK pour 'murderer, 'assassin' est plutôt réservé aux meurtres de personnages publics - et encore. 'Killer' est plus neutre.
- 'he or she killed someone': 'they killed someone'.
- retenir: le moment où : the moment when...
- This story => these stories
- you mustn't be too sensitive...
maintenant, c'est comme vous voulez, quand vous voulez !

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de magie8, postée le 29-12-2025 à 09:10:00 (S | E)
hello dears Thank you for your help
follow up answer B
Avec toutes les corrections de correction, j'espère avoir amélioré sans nouvelles fautes

I like detective stories because I like to search for murderers and to understand why they killed someone. I like to see killers' reaction when they are committing the crimes and the moment when they are unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime is complex. I find that the detective stories are very interesting. The criminal often has a lot of imagination.
These stories are suspenseful. Readers don't want to finish detective stories quickly because the actions are thrilling. I prefer reading a book because it works my brain and my imagination to create the scene in my mind.
For people who really like this kind of stories, books enable to imagine murders and corpses. But you must not be too sensitive.
As far as, I am concerned, I find these stories funny, and like everything about them.
To conclude, if you would like to spend a good moment, I suggest (that) you read detective stories. I wish you a good reading...
En vous souhaitant à tous un excellent réveillon de St Sylvestre

Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de magie8, postée le 29-12-2025 à 09:41:24 (S | E)
hello dears
follow up
ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic... THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP

It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, each person with their smartphone no one talking to the other three.
Education and the new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than associative life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that, when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or bad luck, people help each other.

Joyeux jour de l'an

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