Résumé de stage/aide
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Message de lucas6798 posté le 17-05-2018 à 14:40:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
je suis en seconde et j'ai un stage de fin d'année à réaliser.
Je l'ai fait en banque au xxx et je dois réaliser un résumé de celui-ci de 10 lignes, or l'anglais n'est pas mon fort.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
xxx is a retail bank, part of a group of 3 branches, called xxx. It is marketed all products and services that are insured by the group. Customers as well as individuals and professionals. The agency opened its doors in October 2017, which is why the mission of exploiting the commercial potential of its brand new customers, who are still stripped of our services, plays a major role in achieving the objectives set by the group. To carry out this mission, I had as a duty to carry out a commercial operation from the end by going through the study of the services put on sale in order to know the services put at my charge, the analysis of the target , price of appointments and finally the sale. The day of 8 weeks of internship, we found that the operation was a great success with 56 appointments and 24 products sold for a total of 120 €.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-05-2018 15:05
Message de lucas6798 posté le 17-05-2018 à 14:40:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
je suis en seconde et j'ai un stage de fin d'année à réaliser.
Je l'ai fait en banque au xxx et je dois réaliser un résumé de celui-ci de 10 lignes, or l'anglais n'est pas mon fort.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
xxx is a retail bank, part of a group of 3 branches, called xxx. It is marketed all products and services that are insured by the group. Customers as well as individuals and professionals. The agency opened its doors in October 2017, which is why the mission of exploiting the commercial potential of its brand new customers, who are still stripped of our services, plays a major role in achieving the objectives set by the group. To carry out this mission, I had as a duty to carry out a commercial operation from the end by going through the study of the services put on sale in order to know the services put at my charge, the analysis of the target , price of appointments and finally the sale. The day of 8 weeks of internship, we found that the operation was a great success with 56 appointments and 24 products sold for a total of 120 €.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-05-2018 15:05
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