Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
Tout ce qui a un rapport avec l'apprentissage de l'anglais: grammaire, orthographe, aides aux devoirs, phrases etc.
Can you help me please?
Message de lilidoll posté le 24-03-2007 ŕ 22:50:06 (S | E | F | I)
Pouvez vous m'aider ŕ corriger les fautes! merci
Although we live in 2007, in a "civilised" society, violence is everywhere. It is an obliged feature in the world, it's a tryst reality. As a rule, she is associated with affray, terrorism but she begins with insults between two adults, two teenagers, or a teacher and his pupil.
We live in a society where the sense of power is very important. Every one of us wishes to grow better, the stronger and that at all times and all ages. In a way it is a driving to the issue, actually the will of domination drag many points ... the wars are surely the best example of this violence which persist, that it is in the time of the prehistory, at the 16th century, during the world wars in Iraq and all those which are held in this moment.
And any that with a same aim: to win, to be the best, and dominate for
Economic agents, political, or even personnel. The profit is the major cause of violence
Because the violence is a horrible thing but nevertheless fascinating for his proper nature she isn't wish, but she is inevitable, deep-rooted in the reality. Moreover deeply that we can't admit,and push back a time (je voudrai dire la fera venir et revenir) inexorably
Message de lilidoll posté le 24-03-2007 ŕ 22:50:06 (S | E | F | I)
Pouvez vous m'aider ŕ corriger les fautes! merci
Although we live in 2007, in a "civilised" society, violence is everywhere. It is an obliged feature in the world, it's a tryst reality. As a rule, she is associated with affray, terrorism but she begins with insults between two adults, two teenagers, or a teacher and his pupil.
We live in a society where the sense of power is very important. Every one of us wishes to grow better, the stronger and that at all times and all ages. In a way it is a driving to the issue, actually the will of domination drag many points ... the wars are surely the best example of this violence which persist, that it is in the time of the prehistory, at the 16th century, during the world wars in Iraq and all those which are held in this moment.
And any that with a same aim: to win, to be the best, and dominate for
Economic agents, political, or even personnel. The profit is the major cause of violence
Because the violence is a horrible thing but nevertheless fascinating for his proper nature she isn't wish, but she is inevitable, deep-rooted in the reality. Moreover deeply that we can't admit,and push back a time (je voudrai dire la fera venir et revenir) inexorably
