Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
Tout ce qui a un rapport avec l'apprentissage de l'anglais: grammaire, orthographe, aides aux devoirs, phrases etc.
correction devoir d'anglais
Message de kisa19 posté le 13-04-2007 à 15:17:55 (S | E | F | I)
J'ai un devoir à rendre pour lundi et j'aimerai qu'on me dise les erreurs que j'ai faites.
Wednesday, April 4th.
I got up at half past ten. I had breakfast, bread and chocolate.
It was cloudy and windy. I did my homework, and after, I was bored.
In the evening, I called my sister. She was very happy. I told her my
week at the sky.
Thursday, April 5th.
I went to the shops and I bought vegetable and meat for the lunch.
After going to the shops, I cooked. I had lunch. In the afternoon,
I went to Aix-en-Provence, I visited my future college and I met
the headmistress.
Friday, April 6th.
I stay at home. I got up late and I had a cold. I had breakfast and
I watched TV. I had lunch. In the afternoon, I went to the internet.
At a quarter past three, I did homework. I went to sleep early
because I was very tired.
Saturday, April 7th.
The Saturday morning, it was sunny. I did horse-riding. I was a little
stressed, but I had a lot of fun ! The horse which I rode was called
Galaxie. She was very tall. In the afternoon, we went to the shops.
I bought a lot of clothes because it was the week end of Easter.
Sunday, April 8 th.
It was very sunny but a little windy. I went to the sea, in camargue.
I saw horses and bulls. I walked to the sea. I ate sandwiches.
I hat a good time. In the evening, we come back at home.
Monday, April 9 th.
It was cloudy. I got early because we had lunch at the brother of my stepmother. I had breakfast and we went to him. I was bored because
There weren’t no children. We come back at home, and I went to the internet.
Tuesday, April 10 th.
It was very sunny. I woke up late. My father and me went to the Japanese restaurant. It was very fun! In the afternoon, we went to dance’s school.
It was very interesting. After going to dance’s school, we went to the
orthodontist.
Message de kisa19 posté le 13-04-2007 à 15:17:55 (S | E | F | I)
J'ai un devoir à rendre pour lundi et j'aimerai qu'on me dise les erreurs que j'ai faites.
Wednesday, April 4th.
I got up at half past ten. I had breakfast, bread and chocolate.
It was cloudy and windy. I did my homework, and after, I was bored.
In the evening, I called my sister. She was very happy. I told her my
week at the sky.
Thursday, April 5th.
I went to the shops and I bought vegetable and meat for the lunch.
After going to the shops, I cooked. I had lunch. In the afternoon,
I went to Aix-en-Provence, I visited my future college and I met
the headmistress.
Friday, April 6th.
I stay at home. I got up late and I had a cold. I had breakfast and
I watched TV. I had lunch. In the afternoon, I went to the internet.
At a quarter past three, I did homework. I went to sleep early
because I was very tired.
Saturday, April 7th.
The Saturday morning, it was sunny. I did horse-riding. I was a little
stressed, but I had a lot of fun ! The horse which I rode was called
Galaxie. She was very tall. In the afternoon, we went to the shops.
I bought a lot of clothes because it was the week end of Easter.
Sunday, April 8 th.
It was very sunny but a little windy. I went to the sea, in camargue.
I saw horses and bulls. I walked to the sea. I ate sandwiches.
I hat a good time. In the evening, we come back at home.
Monday, April 9 th.
It was cloudy. I got early because we had lunch at the brother of my stepmother. I had breakfast and we went to him. I was bored because
There weren’t no children. We come back at home, and I went to the internet.
Tuesday, April 10 th.
It was very sunny. I woke up late. My father and me went to the Japanese restaurant. It was very fun! In the afternoon, we went to dance’s school.
It was very interesting. After going to dance’s school, we went to the
orthodontist.
