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Conflit des générations (correction)
Message de style138 posté le 02-11-2007 à 12:10:55 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour.
Voici mon texte portant sur les conflits de culture et de générations, pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger s'il vous plaît?
I think it's a conflict of generation and a culture because Tariq's family has got a tradition for them. You must respect it but now it's difficult for new generation.Young people not think same. They want the of choice and another wayoflife.They don't have a pressures. That's why there are maany conflict'sin the family. It's a conflict's a cultures too the tennagers must adopted the oldest culture in the family so there is a gap between the parents and their children. The religion now disappear more and more we can see a contraste of culture in the differents generation of family. So we can allow mentalities have been evolued.
Merci beaucoup.
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Modifié par bridg le 02-11-2007 12:34
Message de style138 posté le 02-11-2007 à 12:10:55 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour.
Voici mon texte portant sur les conflits de culture et de générations, pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger s'il vous plaît?
I think it's a conflict of generation and a culture because Tariq's family has got a tradition for them. You must respect it but now it's difficult for new generation.Young people not think same. They want the of choice and another wayoflife.They don't have a pressures. That's why there are maany conflict'sin the family. It's a conflict's a cultures too the tennagers must adopted the oldest culture in the family so there is a gap between the parents and their children. The religion now disappear more and more we can see a contraste of culture in the differents generation of family. So we can allow mentalities have been evolued.
Merci beaucoup.
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Modifié par bridg le 02-11-2007 12:34
Réponse: Conflit des générations (correction) de style138, postée le 02-11-2007 à 13:55:23 (S | E)
Personne ne peut m'aider pour une correction, s'il vous plaît ? Merci !
Réponse: Conflit des générations (correction) de style138, postée le 04-11-2007 à 13:32:46 (S | E)
toujours personne pour jeter un coup d oeil s'il vous plait.
