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Message de tiotebouclette posté le 28-01-2008 à 17:41:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Si quelqu'un est fort en anglais et qu'il veut bien me corriger ma recherche ce serait sympathique ^^ (c'est sur Sting soit dit en passant ^^)
Gordon Mattew Sumner, alias Sting, was born on October 2nd, 1951 in Wallsend in England. Autodidacte, he learns to play the guitare alone. At first, Gordon want to be a teacher . But it abandons this way and prefers de the music. He plays in a group: " Last exit " who will become: "police" in 1976. It is in this time when he renames Sting. Of punk, rock, reggae inspiration , the group quickly knows a world success notably with its second album: " Raggata of white " and its tub: " message in has bottle ". The group parts after a discord between Sting and the drummer Copeland. He leaves us 5 albums become legendary. In 1984, Sting starts a solo career. One year later, he make his first album: " The dream of the Blue turtles " propelled at the head of charts with the song: "Russian". He chains five albums until 1996 two major titles of which we shall hold(retain): " Englishman in New York " and the B.O of the film: " l’arme fatale ", extracted from the album: " Fields of gold ". In 1999, he registers: " The Brand new day ". He returns four years later with his(its) last opus: "Sacred Love". Meanwhile he participates in several B.O of films of which that of " Retour à Cold Montains " in 2003.
Sting also distinguishes himself by participating in numerous humanitarian causes!
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 28-01-2008 18:20
Retrait du début de votre présentation, seul le français correct est accepté sur ce site.
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Message de tiotebouclette posté le 28-01-2008 à 17:41:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Si quelqu'un est fort en anglais et qu'il veut bien me corriger ma recherche ce serait sympathique ^^ (c'est sur Sting soit dit en passant ^^)
Gordon Mattew Sumner, alias Sting, was born on October 2nd, 1951 in Wallsend in England. Autodidacte, he learns to play the guitare alone. At first, Gordon want to be a teacher . But it abandons this way and prefers de the music. He plays in a group: " Last exit " who will become: "police" in 1976. It is in this time when he renames Sting. Of punk, rock, reggae inspiration , the group quickly knows a world success notably with its second album: " Raggata of white " and its tub: " message in has bottle ". The group parts after a discord between Sting and the drummer Copeland. He leaves us 5 albums become legendary. In 1984, Sting starts a solo career. One year later, he make his first album: " The dream of the Blue turtles " propelled at the head of charts with the song: "Russian". He chains five albums until 1996 two major titles of which we shall hold(retain): " Englishman in New York " and the B.O of the film: " l’arme fatale ", extracted from the album: " Fields of gold ". In 1999, he registers: " The Brand new day ". He returns four years later with his(its) last opus: "Sacred Love". Meanwhile he participates in several B.O of films of which that of " Retour à Cold Montains " in 2003.
Sting also distinguishes himself by participating in numerous humanitarian causes!
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 28-01-2008 18:20
Retrait du début de votre présentation, seul le français correct est accepté sur ce site.
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Réponse: Sting /correction de hughy, postée le 29-01-2008 à 08:48:57 (S | E)
Good morning,
Interesting.... But why do you use the present tense ? Havn't you studied
the past tense yet?.
Have another go !
Bye
