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Pologne (correction)
Message de petouna posté le 17-02-2008 à 17:23:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
J ai un devoir à rendre sur l entree de la pologne ds l' UE et je cherche tout simplement des gens qui pour corriger la grammaire du travail que j ai fait, si c est possible, ça serait vraiment cool. Si j ai employé les bons temps etc...
Further to adhesion of Poland in the EU, a certain pressure appeared on the face of the Polish farmers.In spite of satisfaction which gets the self-sufficiency of a small farm, the polish farms have occasion to adopt the same industrial scale agriculture as western Europe. With agricultural subsidies from Brussels and the opening to rich markets, farms salaries should rise 35 percent over the next year,according to government estimates.
Looking forward to a stake to EU hygiene standards, countries as Holland and Denmark crowd to buy cheap polish farmland. The free purchase of lands worries polish who are afraid of the change of rural life. But with unemployment at about 20 percent , farming jobs have to evolve and strengthen. According to a representative of the world conservation union, the succession of farms to more large scale would risk to affect Europe 's ecologically pristine regions who live numerous sorts of animals.
Indeed since 1980 the number of farm birds in western Europe has decreased by a third where application of chemicals is plentiful. This change could upset Poland's farms which where maintained in their natural environment.
To conclude, solution could be possibly come from increase demand for untained food across the continent, unless the EU could terminate of Poland's land-owning peasantry.
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Modifié par bridg le 17-02-2008 17:24
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
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Message de petouna posté le 17-02-2008 à 17:23:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
J ai un devoir à rendre sur l entree de la pologne ds l' UE et je cherche tout simplement des gens qui pour corriger la grammaire du travail que j ai fait, si c est possible, ça serait vraiment cool. Si j ai employé les bons temps etc...
Further to adhesion of Poland in the EU, a certain pressure appeared on the face of the Polish farmers.In spite of satisfaction which gets the self-sufficiency of a small farm, the polish farms have occasion to adopt the same industrial scale agriculture as western Europe. With agricultural subsidies from Brussels and the opening to rich markets, farms salaries should rise 35 percent over the next year,according to government estimates.
Looking forward to a stake to EU hygiene standards, countries as Holland and Denmark crowd to buy cheap polish farmland. The free purchase of lands worries polish who are afraid of the change of rural life. But with unemployment at about 20 percent , farming jobs have to evolve and strengthen. According to a representative of the world conservation union, the succession of farms to more large scale would risk to affect Europe 's ecologically pristine regions who live numerous sorts of animals.
Indeed since 1980 the number of farm birds in western Europe has decreased by a third where application of chemicals is plentiful. This change could upset Poland's farms which where maintained in their natural environment.
To conclude, solution could be possibly come from increase demand for untained food across the continent, unless the EU could terminate of Poland's land-owning peasantry.
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Modifié par bridg le 17-02-2008 17:24
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
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