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Message de alice36 posté le 10-05-2008 à 13:30:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour a tous ,
Est-ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger ces phrases SVP ?
Merci d'avance
Clark Glable was an actor.
My father was born in 1967.
When I was at school , I was good at mathematics.
My father wasn’t born in London.
Billy Holloday and Maria Callas were singers.
When I was a child , I wasn’t good at football.
When I was a child , I wasn’t good a footballer..
We were in London two years ago.
Where were you last week ?
Where were you at yesterday night ?
My sister was at home yesterday moring.
I don’t know playing this game.
Was it the nice weather yesterday ?
Can you open the window ?
When I was a child , I was bad at music.
We were good teachers.
Salutations
Alice
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2008 13:39
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Il est demandé aux membres qui ont la gentillesse de corriger, d'indiquer simplement les fautes pour permettre au membre demandeur de s'auto corriger. Merci.
Message de alice36 posté le 10-05-2008 à 13:30:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour a tous ,
Est-ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger ces phrases SVP ?
Merci d'avance
Clark Glable was an actor.
My father was born in 1967.
When I was at school , I was good at mathematics.
My father wasn’t born in London.
Billy Holloday and Maria Callas were singers.
When I was a child , I wasn’t good at football.
When I was a child , I wasn’t good a footballer..
We were in London two years ago.
Where were you last week ?
Where were you at yesterday night ?
My sister was at home yesterday moring.
I don’t know playing this game.
Was it the nice weather yesterday ?
Can you open the window ?
When I was a child , I was bad at music.
We were good teachers.
Salutations
Alice
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2008 13:39
titre
Il est demandé aux membres qui ont la gentillesse de corriger, d'indiquer simplement les fautes pour permettre au membre demandeur de s'auto corriger. Merci.
Réponse: demande la correction de lori, postée le 10-05-2008 à 14:01:19 (S | E)
When I was a child , I wasn’t good a footballer - I wasn't a good footballer
Where were you at yesterday night? - Where were you yesterday night
My sister was at home yesterday moring. - morning
I don’t know playing this game. - I don't know how to play this game / I don't know this game
Was it the nice weather yesterday? - Was it nice weather yesterday
All the others are fine
Réponse: demande la correction de chrislondon, postée le 10-05-2008 à 21:55:01 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
On ne peut pas dire 'yesterday night'. On dit 'yesterday morning, afternoon et evening mais 'night' est différent. On doit utiliser 'last' ici.
Pour la phrase: Was it the nice weather yesterday... je crois que le sujet du verbe doit être 'the weather' et pas 'it'.
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Modifié par chrislondon le 10-05-2008 23:43
Réponse: demande la correction de pclover, postée le 11-05-2008 à 06:01:35 (S | E)
En gros...
Where were you last night?
Was the weather nice yesterday?
I don't know playing this game - Moi je serais plutot d'accord avec ça...
