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Message de lilou600 posté le 09-11-2008 à 14:14:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Voila je devais faire un paragraphe sur le métier que j'aimerais faire plus tard. pouvez vous me corriger . Merci beacoup
I hope this day to become a notary public. i would like following my hygh school diploma to go to a school of notary's pratice because this profession is a profession gratifying. this profession is varied. the notary is a publicly appointed official intervening in the whole of the domains of the law : family, real-estate, heitage, companies...
it has the power to autenticate acts by affixing his seal and his own signature. furthemore, the notary is very developped in europe and in the world. this profession has also drawbacks as the price lists of the pratised fees but also the duration of studies. besides, it is necessary to make a professional training of two years after the diploma. i want to make this profession since years and i hope arrived one day.
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Message de lilou600 posté le 09-11-2008 à 14:14:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Voila je devais faire un paragraphe sur le métier que j'aimerais faire plus tard. pouvez vous me corriger . Merci beacoup
I hope this day to become a notary public. i would like following my hygh school diploma to go to a school of notary's pratice because this profession is a profession gratifying. this profession is varied. the notary is a publicly appointed official intervening in the whole of the domains of the law : family, real-estate, heitage, companies...
it has the power to autenticate acts by affixing his seal and his own signature. furthemore, the notary is very developped in europe and in the world. this profession has also drawbacks as the price lists of the pratised fees but also the duration of studies. besides, it is necessary to make a professional training of two years after the diploma. i want to make this profession since years and i hope arrived one day.
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Modifié par bridg le 09-11-2008 16:08
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Réponse: Notaire (correction) de lilou600, postée le 09-11-2008 à 18:52:39 (S | E)
pouvez vous me dire si c'est comprehensible ou s'il y a des fautes. s'il vous plait.
Réponse: Notaire (correction) de azer3, postée le 09-11-2008 à 19:30:49 (S | E)
Bon soir, voici mon approche pour ton travail, merci de vérifier.
Personlly I hope to become a notary public. I would like following my high study in the school of notary's pratice because it-is a gratifying profession. this profession is varied. the notary is publicly appointed, officially intervening in all domains of the law : family, real-estate, heitage, companies...
He has the power to autenticate acts by affixing his seal and his own signature. Furthemore, the notary is very developped in europe and in the world. this profession has also drawbacks like the price lists of the practised fees and the duration of studies. Besides, it is necessary to make a professional training for two years after the diploma. I have wanted making this profession since a years, and I hope arrived one day.
Attention au fautes des structuratuion(l'adjective se deplace avnat le sujet)de conjugaison(since implique l'empoi de present perfect)d'orthographe(high et pas hygh,training for tow years et pas of tow years...)et de choix des vocabulaires...
Amicalement.
Réponse: Notaire (correction) de lilou600, postée le 09-11-2008 à 20:01:56 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
Réponse: Notaire (correction) de intrepid34, postée le 09-11-2008 à 22:27:11 (S | E)
Good evening!
A couple of points
One day, I hope to become a Public Notary
Après "would like" le verbe est toujours infinitif avec to
High study - plutôt tertiary education
Family, conveyencing, probate
authenticate
Furthermore
University fees et non price lists .............
Do a professional work experience
Enfin: I have wanted to do (to be a Public Notary) for many years and I intend to do so one day.
Have a try, let's know how you get on.
Amicalement
Intrepid
Réponse: Notaire (correction) de TravisKidd, postée le 10-11-2008 à 03:24:37 (S | E)
"Notary public" is fine, like "attorney general".
