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Modern technology (correction)
Message de maxnine78 posté le 14-11-2008 à 21:30:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai une dissertation dont le sujet est : Modern technology enables to invade people's privacy. Does this worry you ? Pouvez-vous me conseiller et me corriger les fautes, depuis la 2nde l'anglais est devenu ma 1ère langue, donc j'ai des lacunes.
Modern technology i a great progress but it's less anonymous because whith progress everything is possible. That's why it isn't a good progress. Some people fall in ou computer and look our records, messages and all they interess them if there isn't protect. It's illegal to invade people's privacy with modern technology. This worries me because man can't have privacy and they can be arsele or even burglarized. Man must be secure for have given personal. It's maybe good for police they search someone or something but another people, I think it isn't positive. Most people think modern technology is great progress but they don't imagine what is feasible.
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide
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Modifié par bridg le 14-11-2008 21:32
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Message de maxnine78 posté le 14-11-2008 à 21:30:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai une dissertation dont le sujet est : Modern technology enables to invade people's privacy. Does this worry you ? Pouvez-vous me conseiller et me corriger les fautes, depuis la 2nde l'anglais est devenu ma 1ère langue, donc j'ai des lacunes.
Modern technology i a great progress but it's less anonymous because whith progress everything is possible. That's why it isn't a good progress. Some people fall in ou computer and look our records, messages and all they interess them if there isn't protect. It's illegal to invade people's privacy with modern technology. This worries me because man can't have privacy and they can be arsele or even burglarized. Man must be secure for have given personal. It's maybe good for police they search someone or something but another people, I think it isn't positive. Most people think modern technology is great progress but they don't imagine what is feasible.
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide
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Modifié par bridg le 14-11-2008 21:32
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Réponse: Modern technology (correction) de port58, postée le 15-11-2008 à 08:16:59 (S | E)
Bonjour,
attention aussi aux erreurs de fautes de frappe
This think make me worried because nobody can have privacy and we can be arsele?? or even burglarized. Everybody must be secured for have given personal (what does it mean, to be developped). It's maybe good for police when they search someone or something but for other people, I think it isn't positive. Most people think modern technology is a great progress but they don't imagine how much is feasible (what means here feasible ?).
Peut-être qu'il y aurait d'autres ex. à trouver sur les risques d'intrusion dans la vie privée. Et puis ça aide la police mais pas que la police.
Port58
Réponse: Modern technology (correction) de maxnine78, postée le 15-11-2008 à 21:09:49 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, effectivement il n'y a pas que la police, merci de l'aide et des conseils. J'approfondis encore mon texte.
