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Correction/quite big family
Message de kuene posté le 08-01-2009 à 16:43:48 (S | E | F)
can you correct these sentences and find the typical mistakes :
I come from a quite big family . We are seven children
the film was a great success and lots of people went to see it
I can propose you to make her a cake She'love it
I'm writing about your advertisement in the today newspaper
Public transports are getting worse, dirtier, noisier and more crowded
I'm aged of 30 and I'm a policeman
I'm really sorry, but I won't arrive to come to your party next week
These days I'm busy so much,I don't have time to relax
I feel completely destroyed. I need some sleep
I thank you most warmly for correcting these sentences in Correct English
marie th kuenemann
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-01-2009 16:55
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Message de kuene posté le 08-01-2009 à 16:43:48 (S | E | F)
can you correct these sentences and find the typical mistakes :
I come from a quite big family . We are seven children
the film was a great success and lots of people went to see it
I can propose you to make her a cake She'love it
I'm writing about your advertisement in the today newspaper
Public transports are getting worse, dirtier, noisier and more crowded
I'm aged of 30 and I'm a policeman
I'm really sorry, but I won't arrive to come to your party next week
These days I'm busy so much,I don't have time to relax
I feel completely destroyed. I need some sleep
I thank you most warmly for correcting these sentences in Correct English
marie th kuenemann
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-01-2009 16:55
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Réponse: Correction/quite big family de jean31, postée le 08-01-2009 à 17:07:52 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Serait-ce trop te demander que :
1 mettre la ponctuation
2 mettre les majuscules partout où nécessaire
3 mettre tes phrases clairement en page ?
Merci par avance pour toutes celles et ceux qui te lisent.
Réponse: Correction/quite big family de kuene, postée le 10-01-2009 à 16:15:57 (S | E)
Grand merci à Jean
mes neurones à moi sans aussi vieillissantes ! pardon
et mon ordi "déconne"
kuene
Réponse: Correction/quite big family de jean31, postée le 10-01-2009 à 17:26:43 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Bon allez, considérons que ce sera mon cadeau de nouvel an.
Entre "vieux", je te dois bien ça.
Erreurs en rouge suivies de la correction en vert.
I come from a quite very big family. We are seven children.
The film was a great success and lots of people went to see watch it.
I can propose to you to make her a cake. She'll love it.
I am writing about your advertisement in the today’s newspaper.
Public transports are is getting worse, dirtier, noisier and more crowded.
I'm aged of 30 and I'm a policeman.
I'm really sorry, but I won't arrive manage to come to your party next week.
These days I'm so busy so much , that I don't have time to relax.
I feel completely destroyed exhausted. I need some sleep.
Should you require further explanation, just ask.
Réponse: Correction/quite big family de kuene, postée le 10-01-2009 à 18:14:10 (S | E)
bonsoir,
c'est super sympa ! N'ayant jamais pu aller quelque temps en GB pour parler la langue fuently, je m'exerce avec "anglais facile" et quelques cours à l'"UP"
où le prof, un vieil Anglais, nous a donné à corriger le fameux texte.
Comme par ailleurs, je fais aussi de la philo, je n'ai pas trop de temps entre mes casseroles, lessives, courses et autres...heureuse retraite pour faire un peu ce qui plait
encore merci et bonne annee !
je saurai desormais à qui m'adresser, mais sans exagerer
kuene
