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Message de floflo33 posté le 20-01-2009 à 17:08:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider à corriger mes erreurs? ( ce sont des phrases mises dans le désordre)
One of the main causes of immigration in France is economic immigration. It must with the French need for workforce but it also seen as a solution with the fall of bithrate.
Much evidence indicates that undocumented workers are employed more frequently in certain sectors of economic activity, such as hotels and restaurants, construction and industrial cleaning, as weel as in temporary agency work
The immigrant workers often are very motivated to earn their living contrary to the local population
It's a population necessary to the countries because they are people who accept work that many people refuse in varied sectors
The immigrants who made studies can be integrated very well into the country. On the other hand, those which have neither education nor qualification will have only menial jobs which are underpaid
They cannot be integrated completely into the country if they do not even know the language
Voilà!
est-ce que les idées sont bonnes? pouvez-vous m'aider
Message de floflo33 posté le 20-01-2009 à 17:08:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider à corriger mes erreurs? ( ce sont des phrases mises dans le désordre)
One of the main causes of immigration in France is economic immigration. It must with the French need for workforce but it also seen as a solution with the fall of bithrate.
Much evidence indicates that undocumented workers are employed more frequently in certain sectors of economic activity, such as hotels and restaurants, construction and industrial cleaning, as weel as in temporary agency work
The immigrant workers often are very motivated to earn their living contrary to the local population
It's a population necessary to the countries because they are people who accept work that many people refuse in varied sectors
The immigrants who made studies can be integrated very well into the country. On the other hand, those which have neither education nor qualification will have only menial jobs which are underpaid
They cannot be integrated completely into the country if they do not even know the language
Voilà!
est-ce que les idées sont bonnes? pouvez-vous m'aider
Réponse: Immigration de floflo33, postée le 20-01-2009 à 20:01:25 (S | E)
s'il vous plait quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider?
Réponse: Immigration de mazai, postée le 20-01-2009 à 20:04:07 (S | E)
i'm french because i was born in france
Réponse: Immigration de floflo33, postée le 20-01-2009 à 20:39:18 (S | E)
quelqu'un pourrait-il me dire si mes phrases sont correctes?
merci
