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Lettre /Dear Rosalind
Message de mariinee posté le 25-01-2009 à 18:10:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
, pouvez vous lire ma lettre et m'indiquer mes fautes 
Ceci est une rédaction que je dois rendre. Si vous avez des conseils à me donner cela est avec plaisir !
Le thème est d'écrire une lettre d'amour a une personne qui ne nous aime pas.
MERCI BEAUCOUP !
Dear Rosalind,
The Sun will rise and set, the tide will come in and go out, the seasons will change, the birds will fly South for the winter and return in the spring, and the caterpiller will transform itself into a beautiful butterfly. And me, I will always love you.
Dearest, I feel true & I would like be with you, but since we are physically separated by miles of emptiness, this expression must come in the form of letters such as this.
For without you, my life is like empty.
I really hope that our first date was not our last because since I saw you I think of you every days. I can’t live without you.
I want know, when I see you again ? I need you
Until I hear from you, please take good care of yourself.
Love always, Don. *
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2009 18:12
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Message de mariinee posté le 25-01-2009 à 18:10:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
, pouvez vous lire ma lettre et m'indiquer mes fautes Ceci est une rédaction que je dois rendre. Si vous avez des conseils à me donner cela est avec plaisir !
Le thème est d'écrire une lettre d'amour a une personne qui ne nous aime pas.
MERCI BEAUCOUP !
Dear Rosalind,
The Sun will rise and set, the tide will come in and go out, the seasons will change, the birds will fly South for the winter and return in the spring, and the caterpiller will transform itself into a beautiful butterfly. And me, I will always love you.
Dearest, I feel true & I would like be with you, but since we are physically separated by miles of emptiness, this expression must come in the form of letters such as this.
For without you, my life is like empty.
I really hope that our first date was not our last because since I saw you I think of you every days. I can’t live without you.
I want know, when I see you again ? I need you
Until I hear from you, please take good care of yourself.
Love always, Don. *
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2009 18:12
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Réponse: Lettre /Dear Rosalind de jean31, postée le 25-01-2009 à 18:30:57 (S | E)
Dear Rosalind,
Bonjour,
The sun Pourquoi la majuscule ? will rise and set, the tide will come in and go out, the seasons will change, the birds will fly South for the winter and return in the spring, and the caterpillar will transform itself into a beautiful butterfly. As for me, I will always love you.
Dearest, I feel true & I would like to be with you, but since we are physically separated by miles of emptiness, this expression must come in the form of letters such as this one.
For without you, my life is like empty.
I really hope that our first date was not our last one because since I saw you I've been thinking of you every days. I can’t live without you.
I want to know when I'll see you again. C'est une interrogation indirecte.
I need you.
Until I hear from you, please take good care of yourself.
Love always, Don. *
- Seul véritable problème : le present perfect.
- Singulier avec every.
Réponse: Lettre /Dear Rosalind de mariinee, postée le 25-01-2009 à 18:57:30 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour cette correction.
A bientot =)
