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Message de mariinou34 posté le 14-03-2009 à 18:05:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde;
j'ai un devoir d'anglais à faire; j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à voir ce qui ne va pas et ce qu'il y a à corriger.
- Hello, i will as you some questions in connection with you project
* Hello, yes let us start.
- When since have you this ambitious prooject at the head.
* A few yeaars ago already that i have this project at the head.
- Of what consist this project ?
* I made this project to place at the disposal of the poor children a laptop
- Do you think this project help the poor children ?
* Yes, the project allows at the children learning and self expression
- It is a good project thank you. Bye bye...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-03-2009 18:50
+ titre
Message de mariinou34 posté le 14-03-2009 à 18:05:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde;
j'ai un devoir d'anglais à faire; j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à voir ce qui ne va pas et ce qu'il y a à corriger.
- Hello, i will as you some questions in connection with you project
* Hello, yes let us start.
- When since have you this ambitious prooject at the head.
* A few yeaars ago already that i have this project at the head.
- Of what consist this project ?
* I made this project to place at the disposal of the poor children a laptop
- Do you think this project help the poor children ?
* Yes, the project allows at the children learning and self expression
- It is a good project thank you. Bye bye...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-03-2009 18:50
+ titre
Réponse: Correction/with your project de linsey34, postée le 14-03-2009 à 18:47:54 (S | E)
Dear Mariinou,
en rouge les erreurs à modifier:
- Hello, i will as you some questions in connection with you project
* Hello, yes let us start.
- When since have you this ambitious prooject at the head.
* A few yeaars ago already that i have this project at the head.
- Of what consist this project ?
* I made this project to place at the disposal of the poor children a laptop
- Do you think this project help
* Yes, the project allows
- It is a good project thank you. Bye bye...
