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Message de anae posté le 11-04-2009 à 16:39:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour a tous,
Je suis étudiante ingénieur en 1ère année, et j'ai un résumé à faire en anglais concernant un projet portant sur la communication.
Pouvez vous corriger les fautes et les tournures de phrases s'il vous plait?
Merci d'avance
Anae
Good internal communication theory is very interesting to study. Indeed, it gives us a very precise idea of tolls to set up to have an effective communication in the company. So, the daily communication requires some elements. For instance, the staff’s motivation and corporate culture need to be reinforced. Sometimes, the balance of a firm is disturbed by such and such events ; what it is called a crisis period. Then the society’s leaders will established another strategy of communication. This one occures in three steps. Before the crisis, know how to anticipate all the risks which the company can be submitted and think about an action plan. Next, we have to be able to get back the initiatives of the events, to cancel the gossips, to communicate clear and precise information and to strengthen the internal communication. To finish, we must draw lessons of the event.
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Modifié par anae le 11-04-2009 16:39
Message de anae posté le 11-04-2009 à 16:39:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour a tous,
Je suis étudiante ingénieur en 1ère année, et j'ai un résumé à faire en anglais concernant un projet portant sur la communication.
Pouvez vous corriger les fautes et les tournures de phrases s'il vous plait?
Merci d'avance
Anae
Good internal communication theory is very interesting to study. Indeed, it gives us a very precise idea of tolls to set up to have an effective communication in the company. So, the daily communication requires some elements. For instance, the staff’s motivation and corporate culture need to be reinforced. Sometimes, the balance of a firm is disturbed by such and such events ; what it is called a crisis period. Then the society’s leaders will established another strategy of communication. This one occures in three steps. Before the crisis, know how to anticipate all the risks which the company can be submitted and think about an action plan. Next, we have to be able to get back the initiatives of the events, to cancel the gossips, to communicate clear and precise information and to strengthen the internal communication. To finish, we must draw lessons of the event.
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Modifié par anae le 11-04-2009 16:39
