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Correction /Sarah
Message de vbbmarie posté le 03-05-2009 à 14:16:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai écrit un texte en anglais pour un devoir et j'aimerais bien que vous me disiez s'il y a des fautes. Merci d'avance. en voici le contenu(t):
Hi Sarah how are things with you? here my beautiful holiday in paris: on 28 April, I left with my two friends by train. We stayed for two days. First, we visited the cathedral, it is very beautiful. then, we shopped together and it was great. At the end of the day, we ate in a fine restaurant. we stayed in a hotel near the Eiffel tower.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-05-2009 14:21
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Message de vbbmarie posté le 03-05-2009 à 14:16:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai écrit un texte en anglais pour un devoir et j'aimerais bien que vous me disiez s'il y a des fautes. Merci d'avance. en voici le contenu
Hi Sarah how are things with you? here my beautiful holiday in paris: on 28 April, I left with my two friends by train. We stayed for two days. First, we visited the cathedral, it is very beautiful. then, we shopped together and it was great. At the end of the day, we ate in a fine restaurant. we stayed in a hotel near the Eiffel tower.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-05-2009 14:21
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Réponse: Correction /Sarah de laure95, postée le 03-05-2009 à 17:27:32 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Hi Sarah how are things with you? (mal dit)here my beautiful holiday in paris (fais 1 phrase): on 28 April, I left with my two friends by train. We stayed for two days. First, we visited the cathedral, it is very beautiful. then, we shopped together and it was great. At the end of the day, we ate in a fine restaurant. we stayed in a hotel near the Eiffel tower.
