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Lettre de motivation (correction)
Message de gogoni posté le 25-06-2009 à 22:41:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai écrit une lettre de motivation en anglais pour aller dans une classe européenne.
J'aimerai savoir si il y a des erreurs de formulation, de syntaxe ou même de formule de politesse.
MERCI D'AVANCE
To the attention of MADAM....
Having obtained my BEP vente action marchande , I would like to pursue my studies in this domain and integrated(joined) your Bac trades English for the next comeback.
I am fascinated by this language and the English-speaking culture; it is partially what urges me to practice this language within the framework of a European section. I shall also wish to improve my level in this language, because I am conscious that nowadays it is necessary to know how to speak English, to be able to communicate all over the world.
Later my Bac trades that I hope to have with went up her English, I intend to go to a business school in Ireland to be able to open afterward a small business there low. It is another reason for which I wish to join the class trades English euro.
My level of the language is good but I always try to improve him. I am serious and applied; nevertheless if the other efforts are to be supplied I shall supply them without any problem to improve my capacities.
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Modifié par bridg le 25-06-2009 22:45
Lettre de motivation / Divers
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Message de gogoni posté le 25-06-2009 à 22:41:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai écrit une lettre de motivation en anglais pour aller dans une classe européenne.
J'aimerai savoir si il y a des erreurs de formulation, de syntaxe ou même de formule de politesse.
MERCI D'AVANCE
To the attention of MADAM....
Having obtained my BEP vente action marchande , I would like to pursue my studies in this domain and integrated(joined) your Bac trades English for the next comeback.
I am fascinated by this language and the English-speaking culture; it is partially what urges me to practice this language within the framework of a European section. I shall also wish to improve my level in this language, because I am conscious that nowadays it is necessary to know how to speak English, to be able to communicate all over the world.
Later my Bac trades that I hope to have with went up her English, I intend to go to a business school in Ireland to be able to open afterward a small business there low. It is another reason for which I wish to join the class trades English euro.
My level of the language is good but I always try to improve him. I am serious and applied; nevertheless if the other efforts are to be supplied I shall supply them without any problem to improve my capacities.
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Modifié par bridg le 25-06-2009 22:45
Lettre de motivation / Divers
Rien n'est urgent sur ce site / retrait de la mention.
Réponse: Lettre de motivation (correction) de jean31, postée le 29-06-2009 à 13:49:52 (S | E)
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