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Correction/about the lives of stars
Message de nuyoricaine posté le 11-09-2009 à 16:01:36 (S | E | F)
bonjour,est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait.
There are more and more blogs about the lives of stars because, like Salim, we want to live our lives by proxy.The stars are more and more prominent in particular for teenagers.The stars inspire us, motive us, make us dream, influence us (for example you are going to like the things your idol likes).Thanks to stars you are going to discover new things, for example if your idol comes from a country you don't know you are going to be interested by this country. We can identify with them because sometimes they lived the same things as you or they like the things you like or they have the same personality.They managed to do what you would like to do. For example if you know a star managed to get out of it because she has worked hard or she has never given up and if as her you managed to do the same thing you'll be very glad and proud to have accomplish the same thing as your idol so as far i'm concerned i think blogs dedicated to stars are a good thing since they can help people. To me blogs are a sign of gratitude. Moreover internet is a good way to access all kinds of information. It enables people who promote stars to create a “buzz” around a person, it's a new communications medium, you can say freely what you feel for stars.You can share your passion with other fans and find informations,pictures, music...
merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-09-2009 16:05
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Message de nuyoricaine posté le 11-09-2009 à 16:01:36 (S | E | F)
bonjour,est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait.
There are more and more blogs about the lives of stars because, like Salim, we want to live our lives by proxy.The stars are more and more prominent in particular for teenagers.The stars inspire us, motive us, make us dream, influence us (for example you are going to like the things your idol likes).Thanks to stars you are going to discover new things, for example if your idol comes from a country you don't know you are going to be interested by this country. We can identify with them because sometimes they lived the same things as you or they like the things you like or they have the same personality.They managed to do what you would like to do. For example if you know a star managed to get out of it because she has worked hard or she has never given up and if as her you managed to do the same thing you'll be very glad and proud to have accomplish the same thing as your idol so as far i'm concerned i think blogs dedicated to stars are a good thing since they can help people. To me blogs are a sign of gratitude. Moreover internet is a good way to access all kinds of information. It enables people who promote stars to create a “buzz” around a person, it's a new communications medium, you can say freely what you feel for stars.You can share your passion with other fans and find informations,pictures, music...
merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-09-2009 16:05
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