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    Dialogue/What's on your mind?

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    Dialogue/What's on your mind?
    Message de el0diie3108 posté le 17-10-2009 à 14:32:29 (S | E | F)

    Bonjour à tous, je dois réaliser un dialogue pour mon cours d'anglais.
    La situation est qu'une femme doit avouer a son compagnon qu'elle lui a menti sur son âge. En résumé, elle doit lui annoncer qu'elle est plus vieille que ce qu'il ne le croit.
    Auriez-vous l'amabilité d'y jeter un coup d'oeil?
    Je vous remercie d'avance.

    Him: You look worried. What's on your mind?
    Her: Actually there is something I've been meaning to tell you.
    Him: I listen to you
    Her: I would like to talk you about my age
    Him: Let me see... No, I don't know, you are got thirty-five years old?!
    Her: No, in fact I'm forty years old ...
    Him: But, it isn't the thruth ?
    Her: So, if only I had been sincere with you, I would have been happy and trusting.
    Him: I don't believe you !
    Her: Ho but it's the thruth, you must believe me !
    Him: I know but it's so difficult to carry out ! However, you are brave to admit today.
    Her: Yes, I know, but if only I had said at begining, I want me.
    Him: No, you must'nt to want, the age don't have important between us.
    Her: I agree with you, one question: do you love me again ?
    Him: Of course, I'm crazy about you
    Her: Me too, thank you for your comprehension.

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 17-10-2009 17:52
    + titre


    Réponse: Dialogue/What's on your mind? de seb06000, postée le 17-10-2009 à 16:32:15 (S | E)
    bonjour,

    je vous laisse des indications pour améliorer votre dialogue:

    'Him: You look worried. What's on your mind?
    Her: Actually there is something I've been meaning (verbe qui ne marche pas ici) to tell you.
    Him: I listen (temps à changer) to you
    Her: I would like to talk (verbe à changer ou alors ajoutez une préposition) you about my age
    Him: Let me see... No, I don't know, you are got (verbe pour exprimer l'âge à revoir) thirty-five years old?!
    Her: No, in fact I'm forty years old ...
    Him: But, it isn't the thruth (ortho)?
    Her: So, if only I had been sincere with you, I would have been happy and trusting.
    Him: I don't believe you !
    Her: Ho but it's the thruth, you must believe me !
    Him: I know but it's so difficult to carry out ! However, you are brave to admit today.
    Her: Yes, I know, but if only I had said at (il manque un article)begining, I want me.
    Him: No, you must'nt to want (construction de la forme modale à revoir), the (article inutile) age don't have important between us.
    Her: I agree with you, one question: do you love me again (adverbe à revoir) ?
    Him: Of course, I'm crazy about you
    Her: Me too, thank you for your comprehension.


    Voilà si vous avez des questions, n'hésitez pas!

    Amicalement

    sébastien



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