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Message de annnnna posté le 02-11-2009 à 17:03:41 (S | E | F)
j'ai un dm d'anglais :
Is it possible to combine idealism with a professional career? (300 words)
J'ai fait mon possible mais je pense que mon travail contient beaucoup d'erreurs. Si vous pouviez me le corriger, ce serait vraiment gentil.
Merci
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In my opinion, the concept of idealism is a great idea and something that we should all aspire to make true.
However, in practice and in reality it is often rarely achievable, as after all it represents the 'ideal' world, yet we live in the 'real' world. because on one hand to climb the social ladder and proffesionnel must engage completely which leaves no space for idealism For example a student who dreams of becoming a doctor must sacrifice his leisure and must invest heavily to realize his dream
secondly In philosophy, idealism is a school of thought that affirms the primacy of abstract forms or mental representations of reality, whether experienced or unintelligible so we can see : idealism is possible only if man is freed from the necessity to work bat it’s not possible, we must work for having a good life …
Nevertheless ;despite the difficulty of working we can use our free time to create an idéal world and that by the benefit others of our knowledge (as does fiona in the text), giving money and supporting humanitarian organizations like the Red Cross or UNICEF.. or doctors in the world which allows use of other skills and combines very well with the concepts of idealism ...
In conclusion we can say that the combination of caries and professional idealism is possible but extremely difficult to accomplish
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Modifié par bridg le 02-11-2009 18:31
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Modifié par annnnna le 03-11-2009 09:24
Message de annnnna posté le 02-11-2009 à 17:03:41 (S | E | F)
j'ai un dm d'anglais :
Is it possible to combine idealism with a professional career? (300 words)
J'ai fait mon possible mais je pense que mon travail contient beaucoup d'erreurs. Si vous pouviez me le corriger, ce serait vraiment gentil.
Merci
.
In my opinion, the concept of idealism is a great idea and something that we should all aspire to make true.
However, in practice and in reality it is often rarely achievable, as after all it represents the 'ideal' world, yet we live in the 'real' world. because on one hand to climb the social ladder and proffesionnel must engage completely which leaves no space for idealism For example a student who dreams of becoming a doctor must sacrifice his leisure and must invest heavily to realize his dream
secondly In philosophy, idealism is a school of thought that affirms the primacy of abstract forms or mental representations of reality, whether experienced or unintelligible so we can see : idealism is possible only if man is freed from the necessity to work bat it’s not possible, we must work for having a good life …
Nevertheless ;despite the difficulty of working we can use our free time to create an idéal world and that by the benefit others of our knowledge (as does fiona in the text), giving money and supporting humanitarian organizations like the Red Cross or UNICEF.. or doctors in the world which allows use of other skills and combines very well with the concepts of idealism ...
In conclusion we can say that the combination of caries and professional idealism is possible but extremely difficult to accomplish
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Modifié par bridg le 02-11-2009 18:31
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Modifié par annnnna le 03-11-2009 09:24
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