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Message de jodimoi posté le 16-12-2009 à 15:09:31 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Je souhaiterais votre aide pour cette petite lettre que j'ai inventé pour un exercice que je dois rendre. Merci encore pour votre participation.
Hello Jane,
It is fabulous you remember us! Yes, we have got twins a boy and a girl, they are six years old this year.
One year yet since we have been visited Orlando. We are well but the weather is very frizzy here.
Congratulation for your exam! Where have you been getting to move? We are going to Los Angeles and Texas for one month next summer 2010.
Do you remember last year you said me then you could help me in English, Could you teach me English, if you have time for teaching me. I would like to improve my English when I will arrive in Units States.
I so happy to read you.
Best wishes.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-12-2009 15:19
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Message de jodimoi posté le 16-12-2009 à 15:09:31 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Je souhaiterais votre aide pour cette petite lettre que j'ai inventé pour un exercice que je dois rendre. Merci encore pour votre participation.
Hello Jane,
It is fabulous you remember us! Yes, we have got twins a boy and a girl, they are six years old this year.
One year yet since we have been visited Orlando. We are well but the weather is very frizzy here.
Congratulation for your exam! Where have you been getting to move? We are going to Los Angeles and Texas for one month next summer 2010.
Do you remember last year you said me then you could help me in English, Could you teach me English, if you have time for teaching me. I would like to improve my English when I will arrive in Units States.
I so happy to read you.
Best wishes.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-12-2009 15:19
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Réponse: A little letter/correction de gerondif, postée le 16-12-2009 à 16:06:44 (S | E)
bonjour,
You are right, this letter is less good than the previous one !!!
Hello Jane,
It is fabulous you remember us! Yes, we have got twins, a boy and a girl, they are six years old this year.
One year yet(mauvais choix de déjà ici c'est already qui convient) since we have been(en trop) visited Orlando. We are well but the weather is very frizzy here.
Congratulations for your exam! Where have you been getting(futur ou présent en ing à sens futur) to move? We are going to Los Angeles and Texas for one month next summer 2010.
Do you remember last year you said(avec me derrière, préférer told) me then you could help me in English, Could you teach me English, if you have time for teaching me. I would like to improve my English when I will(pas de futur derrière when quand il signifie lorsque mais du présent simple ici) arrive in Units States(récitez moi les cinq façons de dire les Etats Unis
).I ( Où est le verbe ?)so happy to read you.
Best wishes.
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Modifié par gerondif le 16-12-2009 16:07
Réponse: A little letter/correction de jodimoi, postée le 16-12-2009 à 16:12:20 (S | E)
Hello,
Je vous remercie pour votre rapidité.
Merci mille fois.
Jodimoi
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