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    Dreams (1)

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    Dreams
    Message de folk posté le 27-12-2010 à 16:46:04
    Bonjour à tous .
    Je poste ce sujet et mon expression écrite pour voir si j'ai des erreurs.
    Pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît m'aider à corriger?
    Merci pour vos réponses.

    Write about one of your own dreams .

    One evening, I slept soundly, when suddenly, I met in front of a mirror. I appeared be 10 years old more. To insure me it I looked at the calendar, it showed 2025. I did not understand what arrived at me, I did not know what to make, or to go. Suddenly a light appeared in front of me. It was transformed into spirit. I was congealed. The spirit addressed me " here you are ages, if you want to return normal, you have to do a good deed and I will leave you quiet.

    The spirit flew away and I saw the advanced calendar, we were in 2035.
    Not wanting to stay as it, to see disentangling the weather. I wanted to see to revise this spirit so that it guides me. But suddenly, I felt breathless, as if I became enraged. I had the hands which trembled. Then there was a black hole.
    When I regained consciousness, I had noticed that I was not in the good place. It was a place surrounded with mirror. I approached and I saw myself .

    For me this dream may not come true because I do not believe that a spirit can hurt us. But there is makes who can be realised: to repair the errors, to have the second luck are a part of the reality. Then for me this history gets the unreal and the reality

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2010 16:58


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    Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2010 22:13




    Réponse: Dreams de folk, postée le 27-12-2010 à 19:53:46
    bonsoir , j'aimerais avoir votre aide . J'aimerais savoir si j'ai des erreurs .
    Merci et bonne soirée


    Réponse: Dreams de notrepere, postée le 27-12-2010 à 21:58:42
    Bonjour!

    Je me demande si vous avez employé un traducteur en ligne ? La plupart de votre texte n'a pas de sens ! It will take until next year to correct your text. Give us a real translation and include the French text too and we will be able to help you better.

    Bon courage.



    Réponse: Dreams de lucile83, postée le 27-12-2010 à 22:13:38
    Bien vu np!
    reverso dit:
    je me retrouvai face à un miroir = I met in front of a mirror
    cqfd...
    Je ferme donc ce topic sans intérêt pour personne.




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