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Message de elisa22 posté le 25-01-2011 à 20:59:24 (S | E | F)
Hi!
I have some difficulties in English and I need help with my text. Can you say tell me if I did made any mistakes?

According to me, the most interesting result of the survey is that only 68% of the students in this class plan to go to University. In fact, I’m surprise because this is suppose to be a class of technical program and this type of program prepare you to a specific job without the necessity of other studies. That’s fun to know that young students want to increase their competence to be better in their future work. The knowledge is important in the society and I think that this statistic will prove that my generation isn’t lazy like certain people should say.

Thanks,
elisa22

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2011 21:22

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Réponse: Text /Correction de gerondif, postée le 25-01-2011 à 21:29:55 (S | E)
Good evening,

" This text, is it important ?
If yes, waiting for someone sees my correction. Just to be safe.", disait le correcteur précédent:

(proverbe)Better to be safe than sorry Lucile, you are a fast draw !

According to me, the most interesting result of the survey is that only 68% of the students in this class plan to go to University. In fact, I’m surprise(participe passé) because this is suppose (participe passé) to be a class of(plutôt with a) technical program and this type of program prepare(présent simple, donc S) you to a specific job without the necessity of other studies. That’s fun to know that young students want to increase their competence to be better in their future work (plutôt job). The knowledge is important in the society and I think that this statistic (il me semble que c'est these statistics) will prove that my generation isn’t lazy like (à mon époque, as était préféré à like dans ce genre de structure: as I said, était correct, like I said vous menait à l'échafaud) certain people should say.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2011 21:54

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Réponse: Text /Correction de elisa22, postée le 25-01-2011 à 21:51:05 (S | E)
Thank you so much for your help!

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