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    The survivor/correction

    Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas

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    The survivor/correction
    Message de desdehace posté le 17-05-2012 à 12:00:52 (S | E | F)
    Hello,

    Voici, une conversation que j'ai dû écrire en anglais.
    Je vous remercie grandement pour toutes les corrections que vous pourrez faire.

    How was your day ?
    Quite unusual and disturbing …
    Why ? What happened to you ?
    You know, I was walking … The paper and sooty dust had surged up the avenues. I was alone in the street and I thought of the people who had made yesterday this same march up West Broadway ...
    And then what ?
    I saw a man … He tried to lean against a Mercedes, he seemed exhausted. A yellow respirator was dangling from his neck like a talisman ...
    How did you feel ?
    I felt bad. He was pretty wounded, he made no sound … The street and sidewalks were deserted and I felt like we were the two last people on earth ...
    What did you do ?
    I approached slowly, afraid I might scare him … I didn't say anything, I just gave him water …
    Did he drink ?
    Yes, he briskly took the bottle with both hands which were raw and bloodied, seeping wounds still wet beneath the dusty grime.
    Did he speak to you?
    Yes, he told me I was the first person he had seen, unless he was imagining me…
    What did you answer ? What did you think ?
    I supposed he was in shock or something. I told him I was real …
    And then ?
    He looked back down in the direction from which he'd come … He said he was supposed to meet his friend Guillermo at Windows on the World …
    Yesterday ?
    I inquired the same … Then, I understood, I met a survivor of 9/11 ...

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 17-05-2012 14:17


    Réponse: The survivor/correction de notrepere, postée le 17-05-2012 à 14:52:22 (S | E)
    Hello

    I can only find one glaring error in your text.

    I was alone in the street and I thought of the people who had made yesterday(mal placé) this same march up West Broadway



    Réponse: The survivor/correction de desdehace, postée le 18-05-2012 à 20:07:06 (S | E)
    Thank you very much...





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