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    Message de cashmere posté le 06-08-2012 à 18:28:24
    Bonjour,

    Je dois répondre à un email d'un professeur. Je suis pas sûre que ce soit correct. Est-ce que vous pourriez vous m'aider à le corriger, s'il vous plaît?
    Merci pour votre aide.
    pS: le professeur m'a conseillé de faire 6 mois de cours préparatoire et je dois répondre si je veux les faire.

    Dear **
    Thank you for your email. I have to inform you that I have a good command in englisch. I have just needed to improve it until Toefl Niveau.
    I thnik your are in best position to know what the students really need. I am interessed for the 6 months bridge cours.
    My german skills are good, I was in Germany for 9months. I have B1 Certificat und I did german course until C1.1 in ALC( In parterniat with Goethe Institut).

    Thank you for attention. I look forward to hearing from you.
    Yours sincerly

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 06-08-2012 18:52
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    Modifié par lucile83 le 07-08-2012 08:47
    Topic fermé car il est préférable de signaler les fautes, et d'apporter son aide plutôt que de faire le travail qui n'aura plus qu'à être recopié.



    Réponse: Une lettre/répondre de rogermue, postée le 06-08-2012 à 19:49:28

    Bonjour cashmere,

    Though I am German, I think it will help you when I tell you what I see at first glance.
    I think native speakers will help you too.

    I have to inform you that ... - That doesn't sound very elegant.
    a good command in englisch - Spelling: in English (no German sch)
    I have just needed to improve - It doesn't sound English to me. My suggestion: It was only necessary for me to reach TOEFL level.
    I thnik your are in best position to know - My suggestion: I think you know best what ...
    I am interessed for the 6 months - I am interested in the 6-month bridge course
    My german skills are good, - My German is good/ sufficient
    for 9months - for 9 months
    B1 Certificat - I would say: I have the B1 certificate
    und I did german course until C1.1 - my suggestion: and I did courses in German until C1.1.
    In parterniat - ?? I have never heard of such a word in English, French, German or Latin. But I don't know everything.
    I look forward to hearing from you - I am looking forward to hearing from you. But I think there might be better formulations of this idea.

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    Modifié par rogermue le 06-08-2012 19:51




    Réponse: Une lettre/répondre de cashmere, postée le 06-08-2012 à 20:10:04
    thank you rogermue. it was very kind of you to help me.
    I made mistake in "In parterniat " i wanted to write In partnership


    Réponse: Une lettre/répondre de rogermue, postée le 07-08-2012 à 06:25:57
    Suggestion for: I have to inform you that ...
    As to my level in English I think that I have a good command of that language.




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