Correction/mobile phone
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Message de kinellox posté le 19-09-2012 à 15:43:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois faire une expression écrite, mais je me suis pas sûr de mes phrases; voilà le sujet:
Would you say you are addicted to your cellphone? To what extent? Give example.
I am addicted to my cellphone, I am om my phone all the time, I can send messages and to go in Facebook. I have got a blackberry, it is a new technology that it is fury in the world. I send messages almost every second, I am on Internet to make search. I keep my cellphone all day, I sleep very late at mind night . I can to send messages during the school. I am really addicted to my cellphone if I had not, I would die. I sent messages when I eat, when I am in the bus, I send messages everywhere. My parents are forcing to confisate me my cellphone. If I am deprived of my cellphone, it is as if he tears a faculty member.
Merci d'avance de m'avoir aidé.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-09-2012 16:14
Message de kinellox posté le 19-09-2012 à 15:43:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois faire une expression écrite, mais je me suis pas sûr de mes phrases; voilà le sujet:
Would you say you are addicted to your cellphone? To what extent? Give example.
I am addicted to my cellphone, I am om my phone all the time, I can send messages and to go in Facebook. I have got a blackberry, it is a new technology that it is fury in the world. I send messages almost every second, I am on Internet to make search. I keep my cellphone all day, I sleep very late at mind night . I can to send messages during the school. I am really addicted to my cellphone if I had not, I would die. I sent messages when I eat, when I am in the bus, I send messages everywhere. My parents are forcing to confisate me my cellphone. If I am deprived of my cellphone, it is as if he tears a faculty member.
Merci d'avance de m'avoir aidé.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-09-2012 16:14
Réponse: Correction/mobile phone de gerondif, postée le 19-09-2012 à 18:59:12 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Vous n'auriez pas un peu forcé sur le traducteur? parce que "a faculty member", c'est un membre du corps des professeurs de l'université qu'on vous arrache....
I am addicted to my cellphone, I am om my phone all the time, I can send messages and to go in Facebook. I have got a blackberry, it is a new technology that it is fury in the world("ft" français traduit). I send messages almost every second, I am on the Internet to make search(ft). I keep my cellphone all day, I sleep very late at mind night (orthographe). I can to send messages during the school(ft). I am really addicted to my cellphone if I had not(conjugaison), I would die. I sent(voir message suivant) messages when I eat, when I am in the bus, I send messages everywhere. My parents are forcing to confisate me(ft) my cellphone. If I am (le temps est maladroit après if) deprived of my cellphone, it is as if he(qui est ce il?) tears a faculty member.(ft!!)
Réponse: Correction/mobile phone de nveras, postée le 19-09-2012 à 20:10:36 (S | E)
Hello. One more help.
I sent (simple present) messages when I eat (present continuous), when I am in the bus,
Sounds better. Bye
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