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Unemployment/correction
Message de cashmere posté le 07-12-2012 à 16:56:52 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,

j'écris un texte sur le chômage, pourriez-vous me le corriger, s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.

Unemployment is the nightmare of all Students, why should we study if at the end we will have the difficulties to be employed
Some people think that unemployment is not the problem of the government, the demography increases every day, and even if they provide sufficient job for the askers, it will be always more unemployed because there are always more new graduates

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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2012 21:26

Réponse: Unemployment/correction de gerondif, postée le 07-12-2012 à 17:59:32 (S | E)
Bonjour,

Unemployment is the nightmare of all Students, why should we study if at the end we will have the difficulties to be employed(if in the end, wa can't find a job ?)

Some people think that unemployment is not the problem of the government, the demography increases every day, (it is not demography that increases, it is the number of students)

and even if they provide sufficient(enough) jobs for the askers, it will be always more unemployed people(il y a : there is/ ily aura: there will be)

because there are always more new graduates (there will always be more and more graduates /de plus en plus de)

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