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    Game plan /John's case

    Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas

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    Game plan /John's case
    Message de majicb75 posté le 24-01-2013 à 01:19:41 (S | E | F)
    Hello

    I need your help to improve my writing. I would appreciate if you could correct this text.
    Thank you very much.

    Game plan

    I will inform the parents that their situation has been reported to the Director of Youth Protection.
    I will meet the parents and inform them of the content of the report
    I will ask them what is their view on the situation
    I will ask them how they going to improve the situation
    I will meet the child and inform him that his situation has been reported to the Director of Youth Protection.
    I will ask him to tell me how his parents threats him
    I will ask him if he feels that is safety is at risk
    I will contact the school and ask for their observations
    I will write an evaluation report for the court
    In that report, I will determine if the safety and the development of the child are at risk
    I will give my recommendations to the judge.
    I will submit my report to the youth court.

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 24-01-2013 08:40

    Réponse: Game plan /John's case de princesschenel, postée le 24-01-2013 à 07:04:23 (S | E)
    Hello,

    You have done a great job. A few of the sentences needed minor corrections, which I have written in red. 

    I will inform the parents that their situation has been reported to the Director of Youth Protection.
    I will meet the parents and inform them of the content of the report.
    I will ask them what is their view on the situation.
    I will ask them how they are going to improve the situation.
    I will meet the child and inform him that his situation has been reported to the Director of Youth Protection.
    I will ask him to tell me how his parents threatens him.
    I will ask him if he feels that his safety is at risk.
    I will contact the school and ask for their observations.
    I will write an evaluation report for the court.
    In that report, I will determine if the safety and the development of the child is at risk.
    I will give my recommendations to the judge.
    I will submit my report to the youth court.

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 24-01-2013 08:43
    Please help,but don't give the correction.
    Thank you.



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