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Message de ineuuhnoona posté le 11-03-2013 à 19:15:29 (S | E | F)
Coucou, Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît car je voulais savoir si mon texte est bon (conjugaison, grammaire...) par rapport au sujet donné?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Prepare to write:
Think of your "reglement interieur": What is forbidden ? Where ?
What precaution must you take ? Think of what might happen in the corridors, outside the school, in the playground, in the gym, in the dining, hall...
Make you leaflet attractive. Use letters of various sizes, capitals, bold print, colours...
Rules
The guest house is not a place freely accessible to the public. This is a family home with her. There may also be other travelers under the same roof. That is why we invite you to enjoy all the living spaces available in the friendliness and respect for privacy.
Arrivals:
The first day, people are expected between 16pm and 19pm. Late arrivals should be advised to breakfast
Departures:
The last day departures are later than noon. Departures must be notified to breakfast
Breakfast:
Breakfasts are served inside or outside the house if the weather permits, between 8:30 am and 10am.
The table d'hôte:
see cooking classes, evening BBQ, and evening Tapas Picnic Baskets.
The rooms:
The rooms are not provided in order to do laundry or take meals ...
Flat screen TV with TNT is available to visitors in each room, the sound should be moderate from 22heures.
Visitors can also access free Wi-Fi. Illegal downloading is prohibited.
Upon request, a hairdryer, a flat iron and iron English will be available.
If it is tradition that visitors fall bedding, clothing and effects, hosts perform daily passage of cleanliness including emptying bins and renew the machine if necessary.
Valuables (jewelry, multimedia devices, various means of payment, etc.). Should not be left in rooms or in cars ..
The pool:
It is available at the hours 10 am to 12 pm and from 14h to 17h. This is a private pool, whatever the time of year. Children to swim is the responsibility of visitors who accompany them.
General Provisions:
it is forbidden to smoke in public places. The entire facility, including the rooms is non-smoking.
Our pets are not allowed
Out of respect for all the occupants of the house, we ask our guests to have a decent outfit for any occasion, and be clothed and shod when traveling in public areas.
You will need:
avoid leaving unnecessary lights on,
do not let the water run
avoid using the full set of towels at your disposal if you do not really need
bins are emptied daily and sorted waste by the owners,
Thank you in advance for your understanding and your cooperation
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2013 21:12
Message de ineuuhnoona posté le 11-03-2013 à 19:15:29 (S | E | F)
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît car je voulais savoir si mon texte est bon (conjugaison, grammaire...) par rapport au sujet donné?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Prepare to write:
Think of your "reglement interieur": What is forbidden ? Where ?
What precaution must you take ? Think of what might happen in the corridors, outside the school, in the playground, in the gym, in the dining, hall...
Make you leaflet attractive. Use letters of various sizes, capitals, bold print, colours...
Rules
The guest house is not a place freely accessible to the public. This is a family home with her. There may also be other travelers under the same roof. That is why we invite you to enjoy all the living spaces available in the friendliness and respect for privacy.
Arrivals:
The first day, people are expected between 16pm and 19pm. Late arrivals should be advised to breakfast
Departures:
The last day departures are later than noon. Departures must be notified to breakfast
Breakfast:
Breakfasts are served inside or outside the house if the weather permits, between 8:30 am and 10am.
The table d'hôte:
see cooking classes, evening BBQ, and evening Tapas Picnic Baskets.
The rooms:
The rooms are not provided in order to do laundry or take meals ...
Flat screen TV with TNT is available to visitors in each room, the sound should be moderate from 22heures.
Visitors can also access free Wi-Fi. Illegal downloading is prohibited.
Upon request, a hairdryer, a flat iron and iron English will be available.
If it is tradition that visitors fall bedding, clothing and effects, hosts perform daily passage of cleanliness including emptying bins and renew the machine if necessary.
Valuables (jewelry, multimedia devices, various means of payment, etc.). Should not be left in rooms or in cars ..
The pool:
It is available at the hours 10 am to 12 pm and from 14h to 17h. This is a private pool, whatever the time of year. Children to swim is the responsibility of visitors who accompany them.
General Provisions:
it is forbidden to smoke in public places. The entire facility, including the rooms is non-smoking.
Our pets are not allowed
Out of respect for all the occupants of the house, we ask our guests to have a decent outfit for any occasion, and be clothed and shod when traveling in public areas.
You will need:
avoid leaving unnecessary lights on,
do not let the water run
avoid using the full set of towels at your disposal if you do not really need
bins are emptied daily and sorted waste by the owners,
Thank you in advance for your understanding and your cooperation
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2013 21:12
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