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Message de aurelia25 posté le 06-04-2013 à 18:32:49
Bonjour à tous
pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger?
Merci de votre aide.
I'd like to start by saying that it is a real honor to be here today , in Hollywood.First of all I would like to thank John who suggested I award an Oscar.I am going to deliver the most incredible Oscar.I am goind to deliver the Oscar for the best actress of all times.Try to guess.
She is so talented.We can say taht she has got all qualities.At 24 years old, She has become essential.We see her everywhere.
First , I would like to talk about her series. This series has been a real sucess since tis inception.This is because she plays 2 characters taht it is the best series of science fiction.She acts Elene, an human who fell in love with 2 vampires.A complicated and dangerous love triangle will develop.This is why i love this series.She acts Katherine Pierce, the double of Elena.But she isn't like Elena, she is a horrible vampire who love kill.This series has already had 4 seasons.She can also sing beacause she played in a muscial.
Tou don't see yet ? After this short summary of her career, I would like to talk about her personal life.She has got the right to have a private life like everyone else.As she is beautiful she is alson a model.She hass fell in love with Ken .
I think after my speech you can guess who is the winner.I ask you to applaud the most talented actress ! Wish her good luck for the future.I know one thing , her career is not ready to stop.
Merci !!!!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-04-2013 19:07
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-04-2013 16:11
Vous avez posté ce sujet au moins 5 fois; j'ai beau vous demander de patienter vous ne voulez rien entendre.
Vous n'avez pas voulu respecter les règles du site, dommage.
Message de aurelia25 posté le 06-04-2013 à 18:32:49
Bonjour à tous
pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger?
Merci de votre aide.
I'd like to start by saying that it is a real honor to be here today , in Hollywood.First of all I would like to thank John who suggested I award an Oscar.I am going to deliver the most incredible Oscar.I am goind to deliver the Oscar for the best actress of all times.Try to guess.
She is so talented.We can say taht she has got all qualities.At 24 years old, She has become essential.We see her everywhere.
First , I would like to talk about her series. This series has been a real sucess since tis inception.This is because she plays 2 characters taht it is the best series of science fiction.She acts Elene, an human who fell in love with 2 vampires.A complicated and dangerous love triangle will develop.This is why i love this series.She acts Katherine Pierce, the double of Elena.But she isn't like Elena, she is a horrible vampire who love kill.This series has already had 4 seasons.She can also sing beacause she played in a muscial.
Tou don't see yet ? After this short summary of her career, I would like to talk about her personal life.She has got the right to have a private life like everyone else.As she is beautiful she is alson a model.She hass fell in love with Ken .
I think after my speech you can guess who is the winner.I ask you to applaud the most talented actress ! Wish her good luck for the future.I know one thing , her career is not ready to stop.
Merci !!!!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-04-2013 19:07
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-04-2013 16:11
Vous avez posté ce sujet au moins 5 fois; j'ai beau vous demander de patienter vous ne voulez rien entendre.
Vous n'avez pas voulu respecter les règles du site, dommage.
Réponse: Phrases/correction de notrepere, postée le 06-04-2013 à 18:42:12
HelloFix the spelling mistakes first.
Réponse: Phrases/correction de aurelia25, postée le 06-04-2013 à 19:07:03
Désolée.
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger mes fautes.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
I'd like to start by saying that it is a real honor to be here today , in Hollywood.First of all I would like to thank John who suggested I award an Oscar.I am going to deliver the most incredible Oscar.I am going to deliver the Oscar for the best actress of all times.Try to guess.
She is so talented.We can say that she has got all qualities.At 24 years old, She has become essential.We see her everywhere.
First , I would like to talk about her series. This series has been a real sucess since its inception.This is because she plays 2 characters that it is the best series of science fiction.She acts Elene, an human who fell in love with 2 vampires.A complicated and dangerous love triangle will develop.This is why I love this series.She acts Katherine Pierce, the double of Elena.But she isn't like Elena, she is a horrible vampire who love kill.This series has already had 4 seasons.She can also sing beacause she played in a muscial.
You don't see yet ? After this short summary of her career, I would like to talk about her personal life.She has got the right to have a private life like everyone else.As she is beautiful she is also a model.She has fell in love with Ken .
I think after my speech you can guess who is the winner.I ask you to applaud the most talented actress ! Wish her good luck for the future.I know one thing , her career is not ready to stop.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-04-2013 19:09
Réponse: Phrases/correction de lucile83, postée le 07-04-2013 à 12:30:24
Hello,
Merci de ne pas poster le même sujet plusieurs fois. Je vous ai déjà dit de patienter.
Réponse: Phrases/correction de gerondif, postée le 07-04-2013 à 15:50:35
Hello,
bleu: à corriger
vert: correction offerte
I'd like to start by saying that it is a real honor to be here today , in Hollywood.First of all I would like to thank John who suggested I award an Oscar.I am going to deliver the most incredible Oscar.I am going to deliver the Oscar for the best actress of all times.Try to guess.
She is so talented.We can say that she has got all qualities.At 24 years old, She has become essential.We see her everywhere.
First , I would like to talk about her series. This series has been a real sucess since its inception.This is because she plays 2 characters that it is the best series of science fiction.She acts Elene, an human being who fell in love with 2 vampires.A complicated and dangerous love triangle will develop.This is why I love this series.She acts Katherine Pierce, the double of Elena.But she isn't like Elena, she is a horrible vampire who loves to kill.This series has already had 4 seasons.She can also sing beacause she played in a musical.
You don't see yet ? After this short summary of her career, I would like to talk about her personal life.She has got the right to have a private life like everyone else.As she is beautiful she is also a model.She has fell (participe passé) in love with Ken .
I think after my speech you can guess who the winner is.I ask you to applaud the most talented actress ! Wish her good luck for the future.I know one thing , her career is not ready to stop.
