Biographie /Amy Winehouse

Biographie /Amy Winehouse
Message de sunshine24 posté le 24-05-2014 à 18:08:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît corriger les fautes que j'aurais pu faire?
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Born September 14, 1983 and died in London July 23, 2011, Amy Jade Winehouse was a singer, author, composer and interpreter British.
The title "Back To Black" made ​​Winehouse an international star. Voted Best New Artist, the artist gets three Grammy Awards in 2006 and numerous other awards worldwide. Married to Blake Fielder-Civil, Amy rushed into the hell of drug. Amy died in her London apartment at age 27, after a strong alcohol abuse.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2014 21:42

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Réponse: Biographie /Amy Winehouse de sherry48, postée le 30-05-2014 à 22:39:16 (S | E)
Hello.

Born September 14, 1983 and died in London July 23, 2011, Amy Jade Winehouse was a singer, author, composer and interpreter British.
The/Her song titled "Back To Black" made ​​Winehouse an international star. Voted Best New Artist, the artist gets three Grammy Awards in 2006 and numerous other awards worldwide. Married to Blake Fielder-Civil, Amy rushed into the hell of drug__. On July 23,2011 Amy died in her London apartment at (the) age (of) 27, after a strong (maybe a different adjective?) alcohol abuse.

Sherry

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Modifié par sherry48 le 30-05-2014 22:39

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