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Message de emma111 posté le 11-03-2015 à 20:03:16 (S | E | F)
Good evening!
I have to write a short story, I just need some help because I'm not sure all that I've written is right. If you don't mind I need the correction today.
Thank you for your time and your help!
I bought this shop with my savings, when I was young. But recently I run bankrupt, because I’ve accepted tenants who nobody else wanted. I had some place in the basement, so their presence was not disturbing me.
But they wasn’t really appreciated by my customers and gradually my clients went away. One day I decided to push them away so I started to hide the food. It didn’t worked very well because this wicked number eight it always found it. He was as sly as a fox and very brave too. You should ask yourself why number eight? Well because they are too many and I cannot remember their names all the more so as they are not speaking the same language as myself.
Recently the problem resolved herself when I bought I cat and it started to eat all my mouse.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2015 21:10
Message de emma111 posté le 11-03-2015 à 20:03:16 (S | E | F)
Good evening!
I have to write a short story, I just need some help because I'm not sure all that I've written is right. If you don't mind I need the correction today.
Thank you for your time and your help!
I bought this shop with my savings, when I was young. But recently I run bankrupt, because I’ve accepted tenants who nobody else wanted. I had some place in the basement, so their presence was not disturbing me.
But they wasn’t really appreciated by my customers and gradually my clients went away. One day I decided to push them away so I started to hide the food. It didn’t worked very well because this wicked number eight it always found it. He was as sly as a fox and very brave too. You should ask yourself why number eight? Well because they are too many and I cannot remember their names all the more so as they are not speaking the same language as myself.
Recently the problem resolved herself when I bought I cat and it started to eat all my mouse.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2015 21:10
Réponse: Help / text de gerondif, postée le 11-03-2015 à 20:08:46 (S | E)
Hello,
I bought this shop with my savings, when I was young. But recently I run(prétérit en a) bankrupt, because I
But they wasn’t (pluriel!!) really appreciated by my customers and gradually my clients went away. One day I decided to push (plutôt chase) them away so I started to hide the food. It didn’t worked very well because this wicked number eight
Recently the problem resolved herself when I bought a cat and it started to eat all my mouse(pluriel irrégulier).
Réponse: Help / text de emma111, postée le 11-03-2015 à 20:23:29 (S | E)
Merci Beaucoup pour votre aide!
Réponse: Help / text de emma111, postée le 11-03-2015 à 20:58:46 (S | E)
I bought this shop with my savings, when I was young. But recently I ran bankrupt, because I accepted tenants who nobody else wanted. I had some space in the basement, so their presence didn’t disturb me.
But they weren’t really appreciated by my customers and gradually my clients went away. One day I decided to chase them so I started to hide the food. It didn’t worked very well because this wicked number eight always found it. He was as sly as a fox and very brave too. You must wonder yourself why number eight? Well because they are too many and I cannot remember their names all the more so as they speak the same language as me.
Recently the problem resolved itself when I bought a cat and it started to eat all my mice.
Réponse: Help / text de gerondif, postée le 12-03-2015 à 10:18:08 (S | E)
Bonjour,
I bought this shop with my savings, when I was young. But recently I ran bankrupt, because I accepted tenants who nobody else wanted. I had some spare space in the basement, so their presence didn’t disturb me.
But they weren’t really appreciated by my customers and gradually my clients went away. One day I decided to chase them away so I started to hide the food. It didn’t worked(base verbale ici) very well because this wicked number eight always found it. He was as sly as a fox and very brave too. You must wonder
Recently the problem resolved itself when I bought a cat and it started to eat all my mice.
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