Correction /dialogue

Correction /dialogue
Message de magique555 posté le 21-03-2015 à 14:06:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous et à toutes ,
après avoir créé et traduit un dialogue en anglais je voudrais savoir si je m'y suis bien pris , je suis encore un GRAND débutant en anglais, je m'attends donc à avoir des fautes.
Merci d'avance !

M: Hey Nadia ! Nadia ! Guess what !
N:What happen's ?
M:Try to guess !
M:So listen to me. I have won the euromillion.
N:Yes, sure and I'm the queen of England .
M: So look at his !!
N:OMG ! You didn't lie ... It's true !
M:Yes, and I would like to go one holiday to selebrate dis ! Do you want to come with my ?
N:Yes,I do !
M:Where do you want to go ? Do yoou have a préference ?
N:I would like to visit Miami ?
M:I prefer to go Cuba
N:Oh...it's okey ...
M:Let's call the agency ! her is the number
N:Good aftermoon , I would like to book a tris for Miami
M:What ???? We agreed from Cuba !
N:Chut !! Oh sorry madam ! So it's for 2 personnes a flight from Brussels to Miami , the week of 20 Jully with hotel . And this reservartion is for Michel Richi ! .. Thanks you ! Bye !
M:You choisead the destination , them we are going to make jet ski, golf and swiming .
N ; Oh,I'm so rich
M: (tousse)
N:Sorry
M:I'M RICH !!!

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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-03-2015 16:18

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Modifié par magique555 le 21-03-2015 16:35

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de sherry48, postée le 21-03-2015 à 16:53:33 (S | E)
Hello. Here are some things to take another look at. Some of them appear to be typing errors.

M: Hey Nadia ! Nadia ! Guess what !
N:What happen's ?
M:Try to guess !
M:So listen to me. I have won the euromillion.
N:Yes, sure and I'm the queen of England .
M: So look at his !!
N:OMG ! You didn't lie ... It's true !
M:Yes, and I would like to go one holiday to selebrate dis ! Do you want to come with my ?
N:Yes,I do !
M:Where do you want to go ? Do yoou have a préference ?
N:I would like to visit Miami ? Is it a question?
M:I (would) prefer to go __Cuba
N:Oh...it's okey ...
M:Let's call the agency ! her is the number
N:Good aftermoon , I would like to book a tris for Miami
M:What ???? We agreed from Cuba !
N:Chut !! Oh sorry madam ! So it's for 2 personnes a flight from Brussels to Miami , the week of 20 Jully with a hotel . And this reservartion is for Michel Richi ! .. Thanks you ! Bye !
M:You choisead the destination , them we are going to make jet ski, golf and swimming . (all forms in ing)
N ; Oh,I'm so rich
M: (tousse) English?
N:Sorry
M:I'M RICH !!!

Sherry

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de magique555, postée le 21-03-2015 à 22:25:28 (S | E)
Merci !

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de sherry48, postée le 22-03-2015 à 19:33:36 (S | E)
Hello again.
Why not post your corrections?
Sherry

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